Please continue. This is a wonderful story and very unique. I'd really like to know how it will end.

You're a great author, but to tell you the truth- I think your wasting your talents. Sure I'm a die hard x-men fan but I think you could be a real author. (I don't know, maybe you are) But that was a great story. Kinda creepy though :

Interesting story. Very WICKED!

"series"? then there's hope! please, PLEASE write more of this. it's a truly unique and wonderful idea, and i can't wait to read more of it. CONTINUE!

Oh my god... wow.