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| LanHikari2000x 2006-05-07 ch 1, | abuseI've seen Dark!Dai, Demon!Dai, PossesedByADemon!Dai(That one was interesting...), and Kaiser!Dai(that one was weird too), but I don't think I've ever seen one where he's actualy from the Dark Ocean. So... yeah... You really should continue this one, it has a lot of potential. |
| incinera 2006-04-20 ch 1, anon. | abuseMORE PLEASE!I wanna know what happens! |
| MysticMaiden 18 2005-11-07 ch 1, | abuseway cool i love davis fiction espacilly this type i cant believe its only 1 review till know i love the way you wrote his emotions and thoughts cant wait till the next chapter ill review them all great |
| Dark Qiviut 2005-11-05 ch 1, | abuseHmm. Interesting little one-shot. Davis seems to having a difficult time. Nice one-shot, S.J.B. Maybe, you can write a fanfic in association to this. Just a suggestion here. Still, good job on your fanfic... P.S.: A little nitpick here. Davis was, in actuality, the "Child of the DigiEggs of Courage and Friendship." The DigiEgg of Miracles he received was only temporary, so he doesn't have the "Child of Miracles" title on him. Still, very good job on your one-shot. Catch ya later! |