Isn't almost two years enough slowness? This is super good, but I want to see the next part also. I like how this is going and I think updating would be a good idea.

This is a good story! I think Marty should just tell his mother the truth.

i love this story!! can't wait for more!!

I'd really like to see you continue this. I've always wondered why Lorraine never remembered any of that night. I hope you update soon.

i'd like to see you go further with this. it's something i thought of a lot after watching the movie and was always kinda interested in how it would pan out. suggestions, i'd like more descriptions to flesh teh scenes out more. nothing wrong with short scenes, but just something to give a solid setting to everything... and maybe a little more lead up and wind down on some sections. you have great ideas here, adn it just feels like you're so excited to write them that you're jumping right in and omitting chances for suspense and stuff...

just suggestions... but really. i'm interested in seeing where you take this:)

sirius

OK, I'll review. Interesting premise, but it deserves to be explored in more depth. If and when you decide to go on with this, I'll be back. I know the feeling: quite a lot of people read my stuff without reviewing. Feedback is a writer's raison d'etre... :)

No! Don't go slow! Update soon!!

Tokau

Wow what an idea! I didn't think about that.. Good Chapter.

please write more soon. this is great so far. why dont' he just tell the truth? Lorraine and Jenn might could be the only 2 others to know ( besides Clara and the boys ofcource). well thanks. bye.

please make more chapters and i promise to reviw every time
deal?

-La

this story is so good! please PLEASE update soon...
will she remember the burning rug btw...?

this is really good, please continue!

I can't wait to see how this turns out, haha... Update soon! I want to see what happens! Great job so far! =))

cool

Pretty good fic!

Just one thing...not to nitpick or anything...Lorraine's dad ran into Marty on Nov 5th, 1955. November 12th is the date of the famous Hill Valley lightning storm & the Enchantment Under the Sea dance. :)