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| Celebwen Telcontar 2008-10-04 ch 10, | abuseYou have flung a well-sized rock into a still pond there... and it shows that ripples go farther than one thinks! This was very good, I must say! I loved the story, Ms. Starflight! CT |
| Allie-grrl4 2008-08-24 ch 1, | abuseupdate soon |
| Celebwen Telcontar 2008-05-26 ch 2, | abuseInteresting... CT |
| Celebwen Telcontar 2008-05-26 ch 1, | abuseThe last line is hilarious... Kenobi on his property, Vader a houseguest, and two dewbacks as Luke's latest pets... and Owen thought he had problems before. Owen's problems are going to go up by leaps and bounds! How long before the Empire comes to Owen's door begging to see (And possibly slaughter) his stepbrother? |
| Alien Roxi 2007-05-10 ch 1, | abuseOh! I found the sequel I was just asking for... LOL! I only get to read the first chappie today, but I'll read more Monday! "Who in their right mind lets their kids idolize Darth Vader?" That cracked me up good! I do wonder, will Anakin be restored to more human in this fic? I will find out...Monday! This is going on favorites, ~Alien Roxi |
| Mord-Sith Rahl 2006-12-11 ch 10, | abuseI liked it. If you haven't considered it already, or already wrote it and I'm just blind, you should write a story, like a little one-shot or something, about the characters in the future after a few years, like when A New Hope should have taken place. Just a little "Look into their future lives" sort of thing. Anything for you to write more Star Wars stories... *GLOMP!* |
| Mord-Sith Rahl 2006-12-11 ch 9, | abuseOkay, had to comment on a quote: “Patience, gentlemen,” Obi-wan urged them. “And have faith. Anakin and I have gotten out of tighter spots than this.” “Correction, Master,” Vader replied. “I got you out of tighter situations than this.” “Oh, right,” Obi-wan acknowledged dryly. I loved that! Very in-character. *grins* |
| twisterblake 2006-10-01 ch 10, | abusehey great chapter i hope luke grow up to be great jedi knight. great I wonder what in stored for them on next chapter. great chapter i love your story keep it up until completed. update 11 soon |
| twisterblake 2006-10-01 ch 9, | abusehey great chapter i wonder how this madness about luke father would end and how would anakin or darth vader would help his son luke and obi-wan and yoda and the other get out of that mess a live. |
| twisterblake 2006-10-01 ch 3, | abusehey great story please completed this story I love it a lot I am big stars wars fan i love darth vader and luke together so ansome please continue to completed this great story |
| Marriella Bullet 2006-08-29 ch 10, | abuseThat was very well done! *claps hands* I loved the story! |
| SithSnoopy 2006-08-01 ch 10, | abuseI thought you tackled all my personal gripes with the Jedi Code in your other stories, but you're right: this story fully expresses all the problems with the old Jedi Code and Jedi Order. Not allowing attachments... practically stealing children from their parents... Ghr. I loved how Vader and Luke bonded so tightly. And your handling of what would have happened on Coruscant once the Emperor and Vader went "missing" was very well done. Ok, once again I'm confused as to which of your stories is now my favorite! :) |
| SithSnoopy 2006-08-01 ch 3, | abuse> “I will not bite you, Biggs,” Vader assured him, lowering himself to the floor > and taking a seat next to the two boys. “And to answer your question, yes, > Luke is my son.” > > Biggs stared at Vader for a few minutes. Then he turned to stare at Luke. > Finally, he uttered one simple word. > > “Cool.” ROTFLOL! :) I love that response! |
| Yvonnia 2006-05-09 ch 10, | abuseWow, that was really good. I mean really good. So good in fact, that I can't think of anything else to say. |
| cursedgirl 2006-04-09 ch 10, | abusevery good! whana reade more about it.. =) so please hurry up! |