I read this and now Im back to review. Very good. I Love Young Blades, but I only know little of the earlier Works so that was a bit confusing. Interesting to learn more. You hade the characters done well and I really liked Grim.

Good depiction of Siroc and what he went/is going through.

Moon

Hey! I absoluteluy love the story! Its so well written. I have to admitt i feel a little bit selfish to ask, but have you ever thought about a written piece on Ramon? I have been looking for a story about his past...

Great way to end it! I'm so happy! Yay for Siroc! I absolutely love this story. It's so good. Please keep posting stories here. I may be able to get into the stories and such on the unofficial, but I have no clue what your name is. I love your story. I want to keep reading your stories. However, I have a few friends who say that they ditched this site for ones wheer they got more reviews, so it's up to you. I can probably still find you. Whatever you decide to do, good luck and keep writing!

Getting kindof dark, but that just makes it so much cooler. Great story, great detail, great everything. You are also tying all of these guys together well and explaining a lot of stuff I never got from the movie. So, thanks!

Great poetry. Your own invention, or is it from 3 Musketeers? It's really good, either way. It's still such a good story. Finally we get to meet the other two. You should really keep writing.

Cute anecdote with "Dazy". Great job with the nightmare. You aer a very good writer, but t times you don't seem to have a very good editor on your computer. But I can usually read through it. I absolutely love this story. Please keep writing.

Ooh! Nice! I am really liking the combo of the two stories. God job going into Aramis' story too. I love your use of flashbacks and imagery. It's so well done. Keep it up, please. I need more Young blades. Thanks. Bye!

This is such a good story. I printed out all of the other chapters and read them at school, since my brother gets mad at me for being on to long. Do you like Siroc? I belkive he is the best, but all of my friends like D'Artagnan more. Poor me. ... Yet, at the same time, yay! I get him all to myself. I'll talk to ya some more soon. Bye!

I only put that so you would know it was me. I read it . It was good. I kinda skimmed over the parts you already told me about and I Skimmed the "Dark Arts" Part.
See Kel was in there somewhere! Aren't you glad I came up with Her in the first place.!

Ok... so i'm reviewing my own piece -- just wanted to say i enjoyed writing this and hope you enjoy reading it. I also have it listed at as it gets more reviews there. Its a fun site check it out.

This is still very good. I love it, keep it up. Stories like this are one of my main reasons to go online.

This is a really good story. Kee pit up! If your first one is this good, I can't wait to read your future stories! Remember, have fun!