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god of stuff
2009-10-27 . chapter 4
very interesting. Too bad that you have left off right when it was getting significantly more interesting. hopefully you update soon.
GeorgeTobor
2009-09-13 . chapter 4
Good very good, but another chapter would be even better. I have read the story that inspired this and I think that you should not have Nabiki and Ranma be a couple in yours. Ranma is going to America and can find love there. For that matter Nabiki could do the same. Last I knew Tony Stark was single, he may be older than Nabiki but she might just be what he needs. Now, who do we pair Ranma up with? Ranma/Clea would be a pairing that has never been done. Clea was the romantic interest of Doctor Strange for a while but I think they broke up but stayed friends.
Dragon Dagger
2008-11-09 . chapter 4
Still looking for that next chapter. Please tell me it will come out soon. This story is going to be a lot of fun to read.
Dracomancer1
2008-07-12 . chapter 4
Extremely well written. Will ranma ever be healed? It would be really nice if he was, or if paladin copied abilities from spiderman. I'm just ecstatic that you finally updated.
DarkStrider
2008-06-30 . chapter 4
Great stuff! Look forward to more :D
dennisud
2008-05-11 . chapter 4
I see this will be a crossover, seemimgly with the Avengers or Will the X-man make an appearence?

Still I can see Ryouga, and probably Cologne making their way to New York!

And theres also the other Symbiotes to deal with too!

Oh you have alot to write here!

dennsiud
dennisud
2008-05-11 . chapter 1
nice start, taking the original story's plotline in a logical direction. Hope you allow kasumi at least to redeem herself!

Hope the old men croak!

dennisud
Firehedgehog
2008-05-08 . chapter 4
cool update
AMWOOD co
2008-04-19 . chapter 4
Okay, 'an eye for an eye' is about to go out the window.

Don't believe me? Allow me to explain.

The Old Testament set up 'an eye for an eye' as a limiting system of punishment. If Person A wronged Person B by taking C, the person B could claim damaged equal to C and it was over.

The problem here is the kind of thing that starts feuds, not everyone plays by the same rules. Shampoo was trying to do what she was required to do. As a result she crippled Ranma. Now Ranma has crippled her. The catch is that the other Amazons may not see this as fair and come looking for Paladin. This is just what 'an eye for an eye' tried to avoid, but to do so everyone had to be on the same page. Justice works only when held to an absolute moral standard (not to say there isn't one, but some people prefer their own rules).

Aside from this (and a long philosophical reply it is), I am very much enjoying your story. The Bet: Crippled and its sequels are very enjoyable. Keep it up.

From the offices of AMWOOD co
dragonblack
2008-04-16 . chapter 4
Great fic! Hope it's not dead. It'd be cool if you updated faster, but I can't complain. (people who think they're entitled to fast updates are A-holes. Its like, "Hey! Have a free hot dog!"and then "great hot dog, but why the hell isn't their a free coke?"

Jerks, huh? Just hope you continue with the same quality displayed currently.
Bobboky
2008-04-15 . chapter 4
very cool
Drkjester
2008-04-13 . chapter 4
Loved the update and hope for more of them.
Rose1948
2008-04-12 . chapter 4
Very, very nice! I'm surprised, however, that Ranma didn't show Shampoo what a cup of hot water would do. ::chuckles::
Lerris
2008-04-12 . chapter 4
This is quite good and unlike the other story in the same universe I commented on, this one is well fleshed out. I look forward to updates.
Peter Kim
2008-04-12 . chapter 4
Let's see how Nermina handle trouble that is coming this way without Ranma including Happoasi,Herb,etc. I suspect sooner or later Ryouga and Ukyo will find Ranma. Ranma and nabiki shouldn't trust Reed or Tony Stark and look what they did during the "Civil War" and I would make sure Ranma's true identy as Paladin would be never revealed by them bu erasing their memories or blackmailing them to make sure they say nothing.
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