 Southern-Rebels 2005-11-05 . chapter 1not bad. I liked the playful part of their relationship. Yes, it was a tad OOC for Robin to cry, but that's okay, you're allowed to do that being the author and all...LOL.
There was lots of cute random kissing. Not too much, which is good. The proposal seemed a tad out of place, considering he hadn't seen her in years, but it didn't ruin everything, it is still overall a good story.
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