Really good. When do we get to see them getting kidnapped?

xx Zanna-Shea

Yeahp. LOVED IT! Jo and PJ... awesome. This is the first BH FF I found interesting. Please continue... I know its been years since you uplodaed, but hopefully you're still out there... )

it's good but i want more pjo action lol. gotta love pjo :D:D

great work!is there more?

An absoulutly great first chapter. Keep it up. I wanna see wats going to happen with pj and Jo (my favourite characters by da way).

Great part one please continue with this story as i want to see what happens between Jo & P.J