YAY! Finally, an update! *does happy dance*

Unsurprisingly, I love this chapter! You manage to pull off the switch between third and first person narrative, as well as this being a great story!

I see you're really into this! =P

This story is bloody brilliant! I also love the way that it makes the reader feel like they're in the story- you do it really well! I really can't think of anything else to say other than PLEASE UPDATE SOON!

Oh, I love it. I really feel like I'm there, on the Elvenpath. It's really amazing, I've always been a big fan of fairytales.

Nice story I'm liking it. Please write more. I really like how you make the reader feel like their in it. And I do feel like I'm in it!!

The Mythical Pen

Yay, you wrote more fanfics. I'll go out on a limb and guess you got the title from the Nightwish song, yes? I love that song. This story's great, too- very dramatic. I love your writing!

huiih. great, incapa. well done.now experimenting with commas?

I like alot. it reminds me of something i can't remember realy it just triggered an picture in my head. plz continue on it i love it alot!

NICE I love your... Fary Tale, haha. Anyway are these people walking the path Elves? Please write more and post more quickly!

The Mythical Pen