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| UserShadow7989 2008-01-26 ch 6,  | abuseSorry I never reviewed before, but I'm a closet reader- I just read all the time and rarely review. No good at it. I'm probably not the only one so I speak for all of us when I say I hope that you continue this story when you have the time. I hope you get through your semester with flying colours. |
| The One True Koneko 2008-01-17 ch 6, | abuseHiya Mike! It's me Koneko! I guess both of us havent updated in like... forever. It's good to hear that you're going to get some free time soon. I'm hoping that your story continues to its entierty. I'll take up my AW story... I'm going to start it over from scratch... and hopefully finish it this time around. Thanks for hearin' me out. ~Koneko |
| Akar 2008-01-16 ch 6, | abuse*still reads it* *wants you to finish it*...please! ^^; |
| Professor Obihiro 2007-06-21 ch 5, | abuseThis story is one of the better fanfics I have seen on this site. Definitely one of the best AW fics. Very good characterization. The story has a good plot, and it is paced quite well. Occasionally there is a bit of ambiguity about the speaker when you do quotes, so watch out for that. Otherwise, excellent. I look forward to reading more, and you land a spot on my favorites list. |
| The One True Koneko 2007-03-15 ch 5, | abuseI'm lovin' the story so much, Mike! Keep up teh quality work! |
| Green Earth PFC 2007-03-14 ch 5, | abuseDude, great chapter...and the last few lines were funny as hell. |
| The One True Koneko 2007-02-05 ch 4, | abuseWow, you updated! Another great chappie, and things are heating up. I hope to get my latest up soon too. |
| The One True Koneko 2006-12-01 ch 1, | abuseI'm faving it, please keep writing... |
| Yakisoba1234567890 2006-05-24 ch 2, | abuseVery Good. Write more, please!~ |
| The One True Koneko 2006-05-17 ch 3, | abuseCool, update again when you can. Maybe you could check and see how the worried others are doing. Sasha's probbably worried sick. |
| spicebean 2006-04-26 ch 3, | abuseI can't wait for the next installment. You really know how to leave us on the edge! This story is superb so far... my goodness, I can't wait to see what happens next. Brilliant, just... brilliant. |
| mike wyer 2006-03-20 ch 2, | abuseI decided to make the characters older than the game suggests (their ages aren't stated exactly) to help make them more complex characters. Heres how I see it: AW2: 12/13 AWDS: 14/15 My Fic: just turned seventeen. Yes, Hawke has been living off the land for QUITE SOME TIME. Not to discount anyone elses interpretations. Everyone has their own perspective on events. That's what makes this site great. |
| The One True Koneko 2006-02-26 ch 2, | abuseOoh, this is getting good... liked the brief Colin/Lash bit there. That is such a sweet pairing. I didn't know that there was another author like me. BTW, I think that Lash is younger than seventeen- she's 12 in my fic -but it's still good. Write more! |
| thefireshadow 2006-02-11 ch 2, | abuseGreat start! I love the survival of Hawke and Sturm (not that I ever really doubted that Hawke was dead) and the capture of the Bolt Guard. Did you have to be so rough to Kindle though? I like her. The suspenseful mood you've set so skillfuly makes me want more. Keep it up! |
| NotPC 2006-02-09 ch 2, | abuseAh, this story is getting off to a nice start indeed. The grammar is good, the characters act believably, etc. Definitely among some of the better Advance Wars fan fiction I've read, especially for a first work. I eagerly await the next chapter. Revived Sturm for teh win >_> |