Love it. I just recently got hooked on this pairing and this is the first really good fic I've found.

gasp...it fills my thoughts exactly, and as outlandish as that was it was brilliant absolutely brilliant, I can totally see that, exactly where the thoughts come from, poor sirius that was realy sweet and though I can see that the canon sirius wouldn't do that but heh I guess that's what fanfictions for
great job
cheers
Lauren

So, I'm viciously against Sirius/Lily(apparently just like you). It's just wrong, but somehow, I really wanted to read this. Something about the summary, maybe. & I rather thought it was good actually (I managed to imagine they were different people. XD0
But, really, it was very very well written. Good job!

Really cute story! I was looking for your other story Beyond the Veil but its not in your authored lost anymore :\ did you delete it?

Good one! Love the forbidden affairs!! Don't get me wrong though - I adore Lily/James more than anything!! =)

YOU DID SWELL!! As much as I love James/Lily ships, I also enjoy Sirius/Lily ships too. Reach up to the challenge and write some more-for me...PLEASE!

Ciao!

i liked it.
the forbidden love stories like this are really neat in a weird sort of way.

you don't like it, and I definitly don't like making other people end up with Lily or loving James in the end, but you did this one nicely

That was awesome! Seriously, I didn't even know people shipped SiriusLily! I still loved it!

wow. w-o-w.

HOLY FREAKING MUFFINS THAT WAS AWESOME!!
nearly cried but i loved it.

hi sL!
wow, that was good, but hate the ship!
it was really well written, especially for something you don't support! :d

So sad! So good! I don't really like LP/SB but great anyway!

hey,
i really liked it and im an insane lily/james shipper but i thought it was really amazing and just really well written and i usually hate sirius/ lily pairings so you did a really good job i can imagine how hard that would be.
- Cecily

That was very good, really well written, even though I admit, like you, that Sirius/Lily is rather weird, you did more than alright! ;)
- Gaby

Again, an excellent story! Lily and James are my obsession also. Though I have often wondered if Sirius and Lily should/could have shared atleaset a stolen kiss once(nothing to crazy)before James admitted he liked her. Well done story!