wha! you killed off al! you're mean! evil evil!

well anyways... this story looks really cool! keep up the good work and update asap!

Now would be an excellent time to update!! I'm just dying to know what happens xD It's well written and intoxicatingly good wot!
~the dreamer

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Aww, how romantic. I love the "World War of Roy Mustang's Office."

"He would rather dance with a short tempered alchemist than any woman Central had to offer."

I said that was gay then burst out laughing...quite frankly it is gay isn't it? I'm not trying to offend anyone I just laughed to myslef at the irony of it.

...Okay now I'm beginning to think Alphonse is still alive and the dead body of Alphonse is Envy posing as him so they can do soemthing to Edward. Why are you sending me mixed signals?! (LOl that sounds wrong.)

The doctor turned, but stopped, then looked back. "Oh . . . and if Mr. Elric has a girlfriend or crush of some sort, you had better warn them that there should be no lip locking for the next few days." Whistling softly to himself, Gray proceeded to stroll down the hall with a knowing smile.

I was drinkin water when I was reading that! I nearly choked!...again.

*tears up*
Oh poor Roy! You got the Conqueror Of Shamballa?

YES! THEY KISSED!

Oh my gosh,I suddenly began to think it was Envy who killed Alphonse.

‘You should go to him.’

‘And then what?’

‘I dunno.’

‘Great plan. He's not even awake!’

‘That's what he wants you to think . . . hey look! He's on your couch! Jump him!’

Lol, I love Self #1, He reminds me of Hollow Ichigo.

Cool! My mom's an RN too!! ^-^

No! AL!

Al has to still be alive in one form or another.
LIVE!
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Anyway, are you out of school yet?
If so, that's all the more time to KEEP WRITING!
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please?

for the second to last paragraph...do you mean the second time that it *was* Al's handwriting? and awesome story...very first FMA fanfic I've ever read, which would have been towards the end of my sophmore year and college starts in August...amazing...though my friend promised me cookies when you were done even if I'm not next to her...