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| sonoralie 2006-01-03 ch 17,  | abuseThanks for you story. You're going to write another one, I hope? |
| Windyfontaine 2006-01-03 ch 17, | abuseSigh, the end to a great story. I know you've probably been told this, but you have a unique writing style, that is actually highly addictive to read. I love how you throw little things like string can phones in there :D. The ending was fine, and I can sympathize with the mom distracting from writing bit, as I've had it happen :) I'm glad you shared this and didn't keep it unpublished to amuse just yourself, and hope to read more stories from you soon. Have a great day! |
| Ghostwriter 2006-01-02 ch 17, | abuseWow. Very cool. Sequel? Catch ya on the flip side. |
| Bailey 2006-01-02 ch 17, anon. | abuseVery intriguing, but also somewhat confusing. What was the deal with Sam having Meyers' soul? It feels like you didn't/couldn't wrap up all the loose ends. I liked the way you got into the guys' heads, especially Sam's. I don't think Dean would have been quite as weepy as you made him in the last few chapters, though. The writing style is unusual--choppy, visceral, a bit too disjointed at times--but I'd like to read more from you. |
| Lilly B. 2006-01-02 ch 17, | abusewow...thanks for a great story...sorry to see it end. you have a really interesting writing style...made it fun to read. great job! |
| ashlyns 2006-01-02 ch 17, | abuseoh my...electric shock. u did read the spoilers. ha ha. i have too. cant wait. |
| Mellaithwen 2006-01-02 ch 17, | abuseAh I too have read said spoilers, but I think they're real, have you seen the promotional pictures yet? They kinda go with the notion that Dean is hurt in Scarecrow thus leading to dying in Faith, but moving on to the story, GREAT. Really long chapter, and I don't know what you're talking about-i thought it was a great ending. I;m glad you mentioned Dean telling Sam about the premonition styled things and that Sam brought up the illness Is this set before Scarecrow, and thus, Meyers was referring to the future when he mentioned Dean's illness, or is it going with the notion that the illness has been around for a while and Dean's lying again? Still a little gobsmacked from reading :D granted it is half midnight, but still not the point...loved it so much, and I hope you decide to start another story soon :) xx |
| Windyfontaine 2006-01-02 ch 16, | abuseYikes! I really, really hate Meyers. But boy, you have his characterization down flawlessly. I will suffer until your next update. Thank you. |
| Nate and Jake 2006-01-01 ch 16, | abuseGreat chapter. update very soon. i can't wait |
| Lilly B. 2006-01-01 ch 16, | abuseone word...whoa! |
| Lp29 2006-01-01 ch 16, | abuseDamn... really smart story line... loved the whole soul bit. Please update! lp29 |
| Ghostwriter 2006-01-01 ch 16, | abuseSheesh! What else are you gonna do to poor Sam? Can't wait to see how this all ends up. Catch ya on the flip side. |
| Violet Eternity 2006-01-01 ch 16, | abuseOmg! No! No! No! No! Update! Update Update! Soon! Please! |
| Mellaithwen 2006-01-01 ch 16, | abuse*screams* "I’m afraid your dear old brother is going to be succumbing to his illness very much alone." WHAT?! NO! omg this is so intense! Flipping hate meyers so much, and sam's mouth! argh! |
| Lp29 2006-01-01 ch 15, | abuseThis is my favourite chapter so far. Loving it so far. Please continue! lp29 |