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Reviews For: Puzzle Pieces

Dr. Cameron 2007-04-21 ch 1,	abuseNice work:) The perspective is spot on.
Dina C. 2006-04-01 ch 1,	abuseIn a story like this where one character is delivering an internal monologue, I think it helps to have an arc - kind of an emotional crescendo where there's a decision made, a revelation, or a turning point by the end of the piece. Otherwise, it's just a drabble. But that's just my opinion. Well done with lots of details and it seems fitting that Chase would be so observant, since he seems kind of reticent and shy.
Rose-Wisteria 2006-03-04 ch 1,	abuseA very intersting piece of work. I look forward to what you have to say about various pairings and such. This worked out just fine and very IC too. Nice work, keep it up!
Friend to All 2005-11-29 ch 1,	abuseThis is very good. I liked it alot. It flows very well and is very sweet. Until Next Time...
Jenn 2005-11-11 ch 1, anon.	abuseNice work! Update!
tranquil-eyes 2005-11-07 ch 1, anon.	abuseI really enjoyed this fic. The flow of it was nice and I liked the idea of Chase knowing that he can't be with Cameron without feeling too much self-pity and his acknowledgement that on some level he'll never understand her. All in all, a very nice piece.
BookwormKiwi 2005-11-07 ch 1,	abuseWell written. A very interesting beginning, that captured me from the start.
livetoeat06 2005-11-06 ch 1,	abusegreat fanfic...i hope you expand it )or create another fanfic that includes chase/cameron); it sounds like it would develop into a great story for us chase/cam shippers out there!!
liz 2005-11-06 ch 1, anon.	abusethis is pretty cool. i'm usually not so big into chase but he's really cool here. i never really thought about how odd it is that she's willing to risk her reputation dating her boss, possibly losing all the respect she's earned. interesting.
Kate 2005-11-06 ch 1, anon.	abuseOh that was really good! Please continue!

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