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Nyte Kit 2008-07-21 ch 10,	abuseI must say I'm quite happy to see you back to writing. I've definitely been wanting an update of one of your numerous stories, lately. And this one was, as always, a good one. Very cute date setting for Kurama and Hiei, and kudos for including Yukina and Kuwabara in this chapter! Also, great way to bring up Kurama's age, and wonderful lead in to the 'Heated Ending.' It was very nice. For once, I'm not upset by your cliffhanger, either. I actually loved it. But I won't love it as much if you don't update soon! So do that for me, please! ^^
RandomnessUnleashed. 2008-07-21 ch 10,	abuseGreat story! I love the plot, the pairing, and well, everything about it :) Continue and update soon! -RU
Kyuubi-kun 2008-07-20 ch 10,	abuseWhoo! Update! UNwhoo! Cliffy! I dunno. Those were the first thoughts in my head. Anyway, I enjoyed this chapter. It was long, which made me happy. I liked the Yukina part and how Hiei blames everything on Kurama. I liked Botan and the braids. I just... liked it. And hope that it will not take you long to continue it.
BlueUtopiah 2008-07-20 ch 10,	abuseshgdkszsbc,lbsljxdx YOU DEDICATED THIS CHAPTER TO ME! -flails- THANK YOU! This was defintely worth the wait. I liked so much about this chapter. First of all, you really have realism between them: they're awkward and uncomfortable around each other because they both have baggage and don't know how to react to the feelings they're having. I like that. Just because they're attracted to each other doesn't mean that everything is going to be immediately OK. Secondly, you gave up Kurama's real age, and it's just so sad that his life ended up that way, but it's also bittersweet that he's been mildly content. It's like he's accepted everything and doesn't have hope - now Hiei is giving him hope and he's almost afraid to feel it. Nice. I can't wait for the Kuro backstory on this, it will probably make me cry. That first kiss was so damn hot. Thank you for giving me some kind of physical contact between them! I needed something! And I like how Hiei is all protective of Kurama, he's going to flip when Karasu is done with Kurama in the next chapter. Speaking of which THAT IS A CRUEL PLACE TO LEAVE OFF YOU HOR. I NEED MOAR NOW. NOW NOW NOW. You know that Karasu-Kurama is my crack, and you write them so wonderfully. In fact, all of this is wonderfully written - you're keeping everyone so in-character, and I thought that your portrayal of Yukina was fine.
KyoHana 2008-07-20 ch 10,	abuseI think you wrote Yukina just fine. I also liked the little nod to the manga... it was inspired and fit perfectly in that particular scene in this chapter. And I think you nailed the 'heated' scene... which was a perfect follow-up and fit to the 'confrontation' scene that preceded it. The 'cliffie', for which you are well noted, ended the chapter exactly where it should have done. As always... well done, m'dear!
Yoko-cw 2008-07-19 ch 10,	abuseNO Cliffhangers hate me T.T Yeah...definately worth waiting for. ^^ i'm so glad you updated. Thank you.
puku 2008-07-19 ch 10, anon.	abuseoh my gosh yay! and update! I just love your stories! They're always so well thought out. Have fun in college and keep up your great stories!
Lady Dusk -Raku- 2008-02-22 ch 9,	abuseOne of the great, well written HxK's out here~! ^ ^ I love it and would like more of it.
lololol 2008-01-30 ch 9, anon.	abusewow, to be honest... im starting to see some potential in a jin x kurama pairing, i like how they interacted here in a brotherly sorta way, but still... im very surprise there inst much fic about them, theyd be so cute together!! also, i love your portrayal of hiei here, it suites him well ... and makes him a dominating sexy hottie ^_^ pls update son!!
Aya-Shoru 2008-01-07 ch 9,	abusepoor kurama, i hope nothing bad happends with karasu
Yoko-cw 2007-09-19 ch 9,	abuseNo! I need another chapter! lol Must know what happens...
Nyte Kit 2007-09-06 ch 9,	abuseQuite annoying. I was really looking forward to this dinner date. sigh But now I'll have to wait Cute chapter this one was. Update soon!
kit 2007-09-05 ch 9, anon.	abusean update!yipe!hiei's sensitivity to kurama is really so sweet!!and i'm certainly looking forward to the double date!plus, jin and touya's romance!wonderful!!(^-^)
ladyasile 2007-09-04 ch 9,	abusefunny, cool, romantic, and awesome! plus kurama in those outfits! i love you!! update ASAP!! :-)
BlueUtopiah 2007-09-03 ch 9,	abuseHeh. Hiei and his imagination. I can't believe they've been dating for this long and he hasn't tried anything. Kurama really has a chivalrous man. I love Botan's character in this, and that Kurama calls her Blue (I get that because of my blue hair too). Also, I just love how well you keep everyone in character even though this is an AU. A lot of people use AU as a license to go OOC and you don't. I like that. I WANT MORE. NOW.

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