I don't know why you think this is so bad. I did think it was dragged on but at the same time I thought it was well written. I am sorry to hear that you will not be writing more. If you are sure that you will never add to it, you might want to take it down so you don't tease people. Later dude.

There are a few typos and a little re-working that could be done, but I really like the premise of the story. I'm sorry to see that it is abandoned. :( If you would ever like to pick this story up again or have someone help you out with it, I would be happy to act as a beta.

aweome!

Too bad you won't write more. It's a really good fic. I loved reading what's there.

OMG, this fic was so god damn brilliant, i can't believe you abandoned it!! Though i am grateful for the words you have written so far. Really, this fic was really awesome. XD XD

update soon

Aww. Poor Harry. Out of one cage and into another.

interesting...

i keep reading your story without realizing it is the same one and every time i wish it to finish. PLEASE!

That's pretty sad... ç_ç
I really liked it...
I hope that someday you will write what comes next !

bisoux

I am amazed at what an excellent story you have created, i am afraid that the person who took over hte story didn't continue it on searched for the user namee and it was not there.

“Sotty doesn’t know,” , lol this amused me i love that aong, but anyways great story a bit long, but it gives lots of detail

If Kasumi McDohl doesn't continue it, could it be possible I could have it?

I tried searching for the story, but I couldn't find, I could only assume that they have decided to abandon it also. *sigh* Its such a shame to see this story go... so is it possible I could continue it?

from,
Missy Padfoot
missypadfoot(at)yahoo(dot)com

Been there done that have a mile long list of people that are still waiting on my next chapter (though part of my problem is that I lost the next three chapters when I was forced to upgrade my chapter and those I rewrote just did not seem as good)...

Personally I think your muse just gave enough to see where the story can go but lost its drive once you figured out what the final destination was going to be.

Honestly I think that even abandoned that this story is lot better (as is) than some of the complete stories I have read and if you intended to finish the story at this point that it leaves the rest open to our own imagination. You have enough seeds in whats here to be able to guess what sort of events would happen (though I am in half a mind to think of Harry ending up with a short stay in Azkaban when Dumbledore discovers his affinity for dark magic) I also am wondering what would happen if that locked chest in the goblins mind contains a lot more than language and it takes some deep occulmency to discover what exactly might be hidden within it as well as what other animal forms Harry might have (maybe even to the point of there being so many forms thanks to the spell Voldemort cast and his view of the various other realities),

I am going to hunt down some more of your stories (though Kasumi McDohl does not seem to exactly exist any longer),

~Reflections

i tried to find the continued thing of this story but couldn't could u let me know whats happening with it i really like this story :D