This is a fairly good story. I'm really enjoying it.

very nice

Great story. I was really surprised by the powers you chose to give her.

Nice! I liked it.

Good, but what's the sequel called?

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oo I cant wait for the sequel!

oo I really like this story! and I like the chemistry between Johnny and Maria, even though its practically impossible, its like theyre searching for a way to make it work between them! I love it!

haha...love the exchange between Maria and Johnny! that was great...haha...

I will! Like the jealousy part! It had to be jealousy! Anyway... good chapter and good story so I'll be looking for your sequel. I don't know if I'll update it today or sometime later. My birthday is coming up! (This saturday! FINALLY) All my friends are like fifteen or sixteen and I'm fourteen. I'm the baby of the whole group so I'm always picked on! Anyway, hurry up with the sequel!

Yay! Another exellent chapter. I will get to updating my ff fic yet. And little hint, Doom comes back! HA! Anyway, to the next chapter.

Sorry for not reviewing for awhile. After the break, school was a disaster! Two of our teachers already died and my friends bombarding me with questions of what I did over the holidays. My answer: nothing imporant or exciting. But of course, I always bombarde them with questions so its even. Anyway... good chappie! To the next. Can't wait for the sequel!

this was a really great story, i loved how you twisted it to fit maria in to it.

o i love you for writing this

"novelization" is the correct spelling, but it's probably a word that spell check just doesn't recognize for some reason.

BTW, I liked your epilogue, though I do wish Ben had shown up more.