That was epic. Fantastic job!

Very sweet story :)

Aww so cute! I loved this tale.

Very nice story. A little bit tacky, but very good. I liked it a lot. You did keep switching between tenses though, from present to past. A few spelling mistakes. I liked it a lot, keep it up!

zi loved it

I like it! it does not get enough attention for how good it is. (One shots never do it seems) But I LOVE IT. You should do more of these type of things. and if you already did I will read those now.

HA! i love it! do more like this! more more more! i hate fleur. she's all... phlegmy! HA! PHLEGMY! i love it. and the story. update soon!

This reminds me of a story my grandma once told me about inanimate objects coming to life. Now I'm scared out of my wits. O

But good job in any case. I love how Gracia stutters. )