Please keep writing. It's really good and interesting.

please update soon! i really like your story, it's really good! ^_^

O... nice dream/nightmare\vision thingy at the end.

"I am not."

lol-ing.

This story is cool, you sound pretty cool, so, basically everything is coolio. (Espec. Ellen emailing back! awe-some!)

*eyes wide* Damn! How dare you leave it there?! *pouts* This is actually... really good. *grin* I've just begun to resubmerge myself with in the wonderful world Ms. Black has created for our pleasures. lol, In other words, I just picked up and reread Tithe (for the third time) and am working my way throught Valiant (for the second) after having set them asside while waiting for Ironside to come out. Considering I first read Tithe way back just before Valiant hit the shelves, and Valiant not but a week later, it's been a while. But! I digress. What I mean to say is that today is the first day I've looked up this genre of Fanfiction. I usually read Harry Potter, Sailor Moon, Inuyasha, and the ocational T*Witches fic. Again, I digress. This is the first multichapter HB fic I've read. I've already waded through at least 8 of those "What Kaye said to Roiben in Valiant" oneshots, so this is a welcome change. *grin* I know I have to sound like I'm on speed or bipolor or something. lol! But I'm tired so... yeah. Short attention span. Basically: It was really good, I liked it, and I want more. Simple enough. You're probably thinking I could have just said that without rattling on pointlessly, but you wanna know something? I could have, but I don't like writting 1 sentance reviews. Feels rude to me, I don't like reading them, and I don't like writting them. Besides, I've been told I'm idiotically amusing when I ramble like this. Agree? If not feel free to tell me to shut up and I'll resort back to the mini reviews. *pouts* Great fic! More Please! ASAP! ASAP ASAP ASAP!

lol that ending was funny. & im really interested in this fic! great job so far!

luv it!

Wow. This story is so good. Update please! I can't decide between who is hotter, Roiben or Ravus...I think Roiben...lol.

It's really good. Keep on going. I love it!

this is really good, please update soon!

This is good! Mostly I just have my usual suggestion, which is slow down and describe things more. Keep going!

cool story. and i emailed Holly Black and she emailed back

I'm a new reader!

anyway, interesting. ^.^ if I had time in my life for fanfiction, I would have done the same thing you have.

people come out of the sidewalk cracks in this story! lol

i love it. you seriously need to update.

love,
Violet