Most..illuminating.
I like the factor of you bringing in ancient mentors and the interactions/agreements between the goblins and the Potters. Most refreshing was Harry's family. It brought a whole new realm of divergence into the Potter-verse.

The bonds and his twin as well were a welcome change, keep up the good work.

awesome but you tend to mix up your facts sometimes actually alot of the time you mix it up but its still good if the person reading it can think of what you ment

I was wondering if you were planning on updating this story? It has been a good read and it saddens me that it has apparently been abandoned. It would be nice to learn of Harry and Rose's progression towards the control of their combined abilities. There is also the fact as to how everyone will react to the quintet's re-entry to Hogwarts. I look forward to reading the next chapter :0).

It is sad that you have not completed this story. I hope that you will finnish this story. But I dont think it is going to happen.

Thanks for writing to this point
MPF

I'm currently in the process of reading the last chapter available to date of this story. It's been a fantastic read. You've taken several potentially cliche idea, and made them WORK, and while you've got a powerful Harry, you've in no way made it easy for him.

The work that he had Rose have to do make it believeable, and enjoyable to watch as it work. The interaction between the two of them works extremely well for me as well. It's not an easy road for them, but it's a road well worth walking, wherever it may lead.

Everything from his bonds to the girls, to his interactions with his family, particularly Lily, has been enjoyable to watch develop. I have wondered if Lily in particular understands just how much her love and support means to him.

The overall plot is rather slow moving, but there are signs of that improving.

I was originally going to comment that you were putting in too much detail into each chapter, making it drag more than it should. However, in Lessons P2CH1 you had that three week jump done in exactly the way I was going to suggest, giving just enough information to show what was going on, without bogging it down. Well done on that, if you can integrate thing like that more smoothly into the rest of your writing, thing would progress in a much more manageable manner.

Obviously it's been several years since your last post, but I was just introduced to this story through another author's favorites. I've spent a number of very late nights reading through this, and I find it time that has been very well spent.
I have no way of knowing if you will continue this or not, but it is my hope that you will at some point. I am willing to be patient. I've seen several stories languish for literally a decade or more come back to life and be finished, and my hope is at some point this will be one of them.

I have well over 100 stories on this site alone on my alert list, but very few that are on my favorites. This story how now joined those few. Thank you very much for sharing this story, it's been well worth my time reading it.

-Oi, what the hell happened? I stumbled on this story recently through another author's favorites, and was hooked! After checking your profile, I'm pretty sure you are still out there (or were until mid-2008). If you are out there, could you please tell me why you haven't continued writing in a while? This stuff is pure genious!

Happy writing, and please update soon!

I can't bribe you with money to finish this, because you can't legally profit from it . . . what can I do?

Maybe I could appeal to your superior intellect. Please, for all of us unimaginative little peons out here, continue this wonderful story.

Time/Dimensional travel usually makes my head hurt. As long as it is one way, and results in greater knowledge and skill for our hero, I can live with it. You've got a few twists I haven't seen anywhere else, and I really do hope you choose to give us some more . . . at least an outline. Throw us a bone.

This is one of the best stories in the Potterverse I have read - however your beta really needs to have a better grasp of grammar and spelling with only a few non grammatical sentences slipped through. Please continue this its been over 2 years ...

Great story...keep going. How frequently do you update?

Thanks,
Johnny

Good Story, I look forward to reading more.

great fic... I hope to see more from this soon, or at least an update on if it will ever be worked on. if nothing else, we could always hope another author might be able to continue it, though finding one who could do justice to this fic would likely be extremely difficult... (not intending to be pushy, just hate to see a great fic like this sit unfinished)

I like it, why hasn't it been updated at all recently?

I beautifully written story! Just gotta love it! I especially like your character Rose.
I hope you be encouraged one day to coninute writing this story and the ones follwing the story line you have decided on!

Ciao, SaWa-San

On one hand I wish I looked at the update date before I moved onto the sequel, but on the other the first story was just to good of a lure. I had to find out what would happen. Honestly I hope you continue this in the future as this is one of the more detailed and thought out harry potter stories I have ever read. You have actually made Rose and the other OC's into real characters. I am loving all the sub-plots and watching everything that is going on. I usually would not like what seems to be going on between harry and rose but the way you have developed it and not just rushed it like other stories has made me feel very invested in the characters. Honestly some of my favorite portions of this story are the interactions between harry and rose alongside his betrothed. I really want to see the outcome of that and because you have the character so real I would love to see it end on a good note with rose joining harry in some way, like I said I normally do not go for that but you have really gotten across the impact of the bonds and how it effects them. On a side note I also want to see what the meaning of the looks Lily is shooting the two of them mean.

Sorry for the ramble but your story has really impressed me and I am trying not to be a little depressed at the though of not seeing any more of it.

Regards,
Rogue

It has been almost 2 years since last update. Are you out there still? Have you given up writing? I hope not. Please continure writing. This is such a great story.