 Dashed 3/27/06 . chapter 1I liked this i thought the story was well written and in places funny.
Gabby's gran: "Oh honey, what you do when you sleep, it’s completely normal and a gene that’s passed down from me to your mother and now to you.”
this had me in rolling on the floor my roomates stared giving me weird looks but thats alright they always do.
verry well written and im jealous at the voices of the characters was dead on which i thought was hard to get right but you pulled it of well. |