Hey, are you alive??

I hope you are, lol, because this fanfiction is one of my favorites. I just love your charactisation and your prose. And after more than a year, I'm still looking for sign of life of this fic. Please, tell me if you are planing to continue this story, because I'm getting a bit desesperate!! lol

sorry if there are mistakes, english is not my first language.

Val

Kya! That was amazing! I loved it!

I really wish you'd update this!

please update this!

oh, this seemed really good. please update soon!

So... Again, very good. I'm dissapointed in Crawford. Couldn't he have at least scared Ran more? lol, just kidding. I loved this chapter. Can't wait for more.

Shinimegami7

"Why the ** coat?" - Jewish Police officer

"I was cold..." - (taken from The Pianist)

Just wonderful. Terrific depiction of the characters. The suspense and intrigue intensified wonderfully in this chapter. I can't wait for the next chapter.

I love Crawford. I'm hoping Ran will, too...once he gets over his seething hatred.

I love you! (tackle gomps) This is the best end to a good day, but I wish you could have been online so I could tell you how good it was and how my jaw dropped and eyes lit up when I saw that you updated.

Ficcy is so good...all of the characters are brillaiantly written, even if OOC (then again, I wouldn't know, lmao). And Crawford...Crawford just rocks, lol.

I can't wait to read more of this addicting story...

write more Plz, hehe don't worry I have the review under way, if Chem doesn't kill me.

Hehe, I'm really enjoying this story so far! It's nice to find a well-written work in this fandom! :D I especially like your attention to detail; you're building up this story so nicely, and you're not rushing anything (which I'm sure would be all to easy a mistake to make). The prose is also very refreshing, and your characterization of Ran and the other Weiss members is incredible thus far. *squee!* Awesome work so far, and I'm intrigued to see where you'll take this. It looks like we're going to be in for a rather awesome ride, from what you've revealed to us so far in these two chapters. I look forward to the next update! ^^

WOOT! Goodness me. I have a feeling I know who said those words... muahahahahahahaha... Anyway, I shouldn't keep this too long... But I loved it!

Shinimegami7

"I wish my grass was emo, cuz then it would cut itself." - Alex and Vivian both told me that joke...

Ecellent 1st and 2nd chapter. Waiting on bated breath for more ^_^

lovely ^^ could i have more crawford? lol

You're really good at writing description, and Ran seems really in character. Having Aya's diary featured should make for some interesting insight as the story progresses, and I look forward to seeing what will be done with it.