awm, this is sweet...very sweet indeed...^^

wa...swet!! soo kawaii<3

i loved the way it flowed. The theme was really insightful, too!
good job!!
~toodles

Aw, that was really sweet and insightful. Well written and characterized. Very nice work. :)

That was just BEAUTIFUL...

IRUKA IS AWESOME! It just made me realize how truly AWESOME he is! Not hiding behind any mask but choosing to care not knowing that he'll hurt one day anyway. I LOVED LOVED LOVED IT! Thank you! That was a touching and an absolutely lovely oneshot!!

Beautiful.

cdk

Whoah, whoah! That was good! VERY good! ^_^ Liked it and thanks so much for the beautiful read!

That was probably one of the best short ficlets I've read in a long time. It had a very powerful message that I so rarely find in fanfiction. Thank you for writing it, it was most enjoyable! *huggle*

Yeah, I guess bravery take form in all sorts. Like getting emotionally attached to a group of children despite knowing half of them won't be alive after they graduate.Teaching children to kill is bravery too, under the facade of protecting the love ones. Shrug. Love ur perspective in e story.

*sniffles* aw. so beautiful!

That last line brougth tears to my eyes. How wonderfully warm the spirit of a writer is on a cold October night.

Wow . . . This story really hit a soft spot in me as if I was Kakashi himself ^--^ Strange, I know, but that's how I feel. I really enjoyed this little one-shot! I hope that I can learn to care one day . . . for now that mask stays on.

...i cant say anything. i really, truly, cant. this is so good - the structure is well done, the writing is good, not overdone philosophy, as i have known other stories to be! (including my own) brilliant story!

Hm, really in character, nice job! I liked it bunches^.^
:P

Loved it.