I agree Kikyo is like a total douche and she really isn't needed, she is only really there for the reason that Kagome can see the shards and why Inuyasha hates Naraku.

really good story i love the ending it sweet so great job. :)

This is absolutely one the best stories I have ever read on here! I read this a while back and I read it again. I LOVE this story and you are a wonderful author! Kepp up the good work!

Peace and Love, fmagurl123!

This story was wonderful! I do hope you write (or have written) a sequel. You really know how to wrench a heartstring without making people angry at you for doing it though.

Hi! I've read your story up until here, and I certainly plan on finishing it - probably tomorrow - but this is my first review. Your Author's Note at the bottom reminded me that I'd forgotten to give you one. This story is really good! There are so many things I like about it that I can't even think of them all, but one of them is how you manage to make it serious and entertaining without constant action. I also like how much parts of it make me laugh. The only problem I can find is occasional misspellings which make reading that part confusing - like reviled instead of revealed.

That is such a great story. if a had an acount on here it would be under faverets. :D

great story I'm writeing a few myself mostly Naruto but thats just because I'm having a bad case of writers block with my FMA fic well any way I loved the story and as for a sequel no I dont think you should write one I mean it would be great if you did I would definetly read it but I just dont know some times it just dosent hold the same...for lake of a better word...magic that the origenel dose so in my opion dont write a sequel I mean theres not much more that can be said after hapily ever after

Kyahh! I loved it! The only Anime Crossover thing I've read that is worth reading! By the way nice job keeping the charaters in check, espiealy (can't spell wortha crap...) Inuyasha, who always changes so much! Pretty soon I'll be a authoress too! Peace! -' Wink

Aizo

Wait a minute...Ed, tall?

*scurries on to the next chapter*

Cool story :-).

I really liked reading it. I was surfing for any FMA/Inuyasha crossovers and stumbled onto this one. At first I thought that Willa was going to be a Mary Sue, but she's not which is a relief. I also happen to love reading angst fics and I think that you did well with that and kept everyone in character.

Keep up the very good work!

EagleBlaze

That was a very very good story. Like the way you used the naration. Wish you would have used more alchemy, but oh well.

Keep up the good work

i really like its funny

You are an incredible author. That's really all I can say. I cannot believe you had to beg for reviews! I'm not so sure about a sequel, though. It would be too tough to top what you've already written (although, if you do write one, I'll be sure to read it). "Joyfulmusic" indeed! That's exactly what this story felt like to me: joyful music.

Please write a sequel, PLEASE!

Or at least try to, when you grow up you should be an author

this story ROCKS!

Please make more like it...(gives big puppy dog eyes with warning sign: do not fall in pools of deep brown for your own safety, cause i can't pull ya out, lol

Pwease make sequeal