Hehe, that was cute. Though I do think Tonks would be a bit more concerned with what she'd done to the muggle shop.

LOL! That was fun.

I won't try finding how many points I got - all I spotted was Dorian Gray and Sense and Sensibility (which doesn't count).

See ya,

Anna.

this was pretty funny..."not nearly enough" hahaha.

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OUT!

This is under the genre of humor... what is humorous about this story? Confusion. What is Gray's Books and what are Remus and Tonks doing there? I like Tonks, as she reminds me very much of... well... myself and I don't understand why she had to be such a jerk at the end; as though she didn't give a fig about the bookshop she'd just demolished. And Remus wouldn't be stressing over a discombobulated bookstore... they're magical folk... it'd be more of a Mary Poppins, spoon full of sugar moment. As for the story itself, despite the fact that your readers have no idea what they're doing there, your writing is quite good. Bravo! You've done an excellent job in helping the reader to feel very much in this phantom bookstore, though when the bookshelves came crashing down, rather than just saying so make your reader feel them... what did they sound like? did the floor rattle? To fit more in the genre it comes up in, maybe focus more on ridiculous facial expressions or funny book titles, as they're in a bookstore. JKRs brilliant character Tonks is not funny just because of her clumsy nature. A look of absolute horror on Tonks' part and a rather disbelieving however accepting sigh on Remus' part, I think, would have made the situation much more funny and believable to their characters. But I did find your descriptions of Tonks' rather chaotic body movements very entertaining. In all, well done & keep up the good work!