Not really funny...I already knew you were talking about the Bonboris(or however its called).
So it didn't even surprised me..though nice try and don't give up trying to come with a funny fic.

Very nice wordlay there, however don't you remember that Shampoo has hit people with those things MANY times... if they were soft, they wouldn't do any damage.

Sorry, Even RANMA is smart enough o figure that one out.

I dunno, you seemed to broadcast the move early somehow. I knew almost immediately that there was a double meaning in the fic...then I saw the item in question in the first section.

Maybe it's me, but the humor of this storyline is already a bit overused--cliched even--and this story is not really funny to boot. My main complaint is that this is not really a "K"-rated material; the potential dirty reference IS there.

what the hell was that? that was kinda boring but hey! its my opinion so well uh bye

*snicker*

What'd I tell ya!!
Way to go, can't wait to see what's next.
Drop me a line with your next idea.
Later Days!!
Isumo Korin

Not bad.