Reviews for Footsie under the rubble

Reviews For: Footsie under the rubble

ERROR809 2006-12-30 ch 1,	abusegreat story, although it would've been better if there were some dialogue anyways hope you write more AS fics!
Necrokon 2006-08-04 ch 1,	abuseThe only thing that bugs me about your story is that there's no dialogue. Everything is said from the third person point of view. Can you rewrite the story, but with actual talking between the two. It can still be a third person's point of view when you're telling it, but just have them talk.
Nightwish001 2005-12-04 ch 1,	abusewow! that was brilliant!
Dar Sel'La 2005-11-15 ch 1,	abuseI like this one. It is a strange way to really begin a relationship, but it works. Wonder how long it will take them to realize that all they are looking for is there, and how long it will take to move beond footsy.
HecatonchiresLM 2005-11-09 ch 1,	abuseI liked the slight distance this had. A nice little vignette.
vic 2005-11-08 ch 1, anon.	abusenot bad, i just don't like this kind of fic, so dont't ask for my opinion
xDaveyx 2005-11-08 ch 1, anon.	abuseAmazing, I loved it.
OUBWIUBGPPPINSOJNONOICNFSOI... 2005-11-07 ch 1,	abuseCool, I great story with no talking! Cheerio, Naon
J.G. The Gamer 2005-11-07 ch 1,	abuseExcellent story! We need more S/A around here. Yeah, when it comes down to it, and the world apparently doesn't give a damn about them, they got each other. Look forward to more S/A stories from you.
Despite 2005-11-07 ch 1,	abuseThis is nice - a perspective on needs. Though it seemed a little detched due to your presentation style, I liked this piece very much. Thankyou for sharing it.
m.baka 2005-11-07 ch 1, anon.	abusegood, i like POV it is something i havent seen for a while
Andy 2005-11-07 ch 1, anon.	abuseit's okay. a bit OOC, but as long as you keep writing, you will get better.
nesza 2005-11-07 ch 1,	abuseI like the fic. It was written beautifully. ^_^

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