i love the story so far wish i could have finshed the game but my dad steped on it and broke it T_T

This is awesome I'm really enjoying it, and I like the little parts when Jet look up at Sara, there nice

I'm new here my name is Jennette Enduro, and even though I just read one chapter of your story I found it pretty interesting and I really like it please write more.

Poor Sara and poor Jet. They do not deserve this and will the 'small child' (not saying its name) have plans for Sara. Please update soon. P.S Your doing great at this story.

Hey... whatzup? Sorry I didn't review last time! Some one called whenever I tried.. I got dial up. But here I am now. Reviewing! YAY! Congrates on the 10th and keep it up!

James: *Wearing party hat for 10th party* Yay!

Gallows: *Blows on one of those horns* ...?

Seth: *Sigh*

Duke: Yep... *Looks at James and Gallows* Dumbasses...

Bakura: ...

The part in the next chapter that is to be posted is one of my least favorite parts in the game for some strange reason. Anyhoo, love the update and keep it going Narukaze!

James: Yay!

Roka (A.K.A My version of Gallows): Amazing what I go through nowadays...

Seth: Why do I sleep so much...? *Falls back asleep*

Yaay! You updated! I'm so proud of you! I'm gonna get to reading so yeah! Keep it up for the record my girl!

James: *Counting fingers* How long has it been since she updated...?

Roka: ...

Seth: Z...

Alrighty then. Another chap! You've been doin' well I see. Anyhoo, thanks for the reviews. Makes me feel like finishin' Franken Jet... I'll get to it eventually. That'll be the last chap. Then I'll get started on the Titanic Wild Arms 3! (Crazy aren't I?) It'll be funny. Then, I'll get started on a long, serious story. Keep the writin' up and remember, I am always watching you update. ALWAYS WATCHING!

James: Yay!

Roka: Yay!

Seth: Z...

Ello! Nice to have ya back! I missed ya! Anyhoo I had to do the review on chap 15 instead of 16 cause of "repeated reviews"... Whatever. I got a question though... The name of the main character in this story...Sara...is that, by any chance, you? Or does the character have your name if that is your name? Just curious! Well, it's great to have ya back! Lemme know if you checked up on one of my stories. I finished the Blair Whatever! Like post a review on it. I WOULD LOVE THAT! See ya!

Your friend and #1 reader,

Jessie Enduro

James: Good vacation, eh?

Roka: Yeah...

Seth: *Sigh* Aren't vacations for like relaxation? *Falls asleep*

I love it! You better get your ass back here soon, got it! Or else I'll...I'll...! I'LL TYPE YOU TO DEATH!

James: Don't mess with the creator... She can be nasty when she's on the computer.

Roka: Yeah... Oh boy...

Seth: Mm-hm.

P.S. Hey narukaze? Have ya read any of my stories. I'm in the process of two of them right now. One is the "Blair Whatever" and the other is "Franken Jet". They both funny!

Hah Hah HAH! I LOVE the sandwhiches... You know, there are times when I believe Virginia should dye her head blonde. Keep on Writin' my pal!

James: *Cracks up at the sandwhich section* This is halarious!

Roka: Yeah! Totally!

Seth: *Actually wakes up* Worth the wait of update. *Falls back asleep*

Yet another Mary Sue.

Mary Sue:

Based off Luitenant Mary Sue. She was only fifteen, pretty, center of attention, fell in love, and at the end; dies in someones arms.

However, a Mary Sue in fanfic is an OC added in by an author and usually falls in love or is fallen for by an already existing character. It's an ego stroke for authors. But whatever, everyone has a Mary Sue.

Usually Mary Sue stories are bad, but you've pulled this one off pretty good. See ya! XD

Yay! Another Chapter! Love how Jet has a crush on Sara! Hah Hah! Okay now... Keep it up my good writer!

James: Another month, another chapter...

Roka: Was it really another month?

Seth: Z...

Yeah... Excellent so far. You're very in touch with the actual WA3 story. A.K.A I love Jet! And Clive! I love Gallows's personality when he's not hitting on someone! Yay! Keep it up!

James: So far so good.

Roka: M-hm...

Seth: ...The action in this story makes me tired. *Falls alseep*

P.S. I love the little humor things you add inbetween events... like when Jet was trying to knock Gallows into the hole at the Unclean Mark!

Hah hah! Nice so far. I love the little extra things you add with Gallows and all. Hitting on Sara... Hah hah. Keep it up!

James: *Looking at Gallows* "Pervert."

Roka: "..."

Seth: *Points at the three* "This James. This Roka. This Seth. This smack on the head. *Smacks Gallows across the head*