I know you're still writing fanfiction, so I'm going to say 'continue', there I said it, it's just not right to EVER leave a story unfinished.

Congratulations. Excellent piece. I didn't think there were any key fans out there, let alone any who would write a fanfic. I loved the way you used a bit character(And one whose destined to die at that) as the "eyes" for the story. Very enjoyable indeed.