Oh how I love bittersweet endings. I found your writing style pretty interesting. Short but concise sentences to describe Jin's emotions.

bittersweet always gets my attention. I love this story.

A little summary for you... :)

"Foolishly thinking about one woman, while the one you truely love is right before you. Then, a parting of separate ways. Rogue, girl, and samurai say their farewells forever. After 3 years finding the woman you thought you loved, only to realize, you don't love her. Is your true love still there? Blindly searching for her in despair. A grave: the name of your true love engraved on it. Despair, sorrow, loneliness, longing bring you down to your knees. what you never realized you realize now: that you did not know what you had until you lost it..."

Perfect ending, in my opinion, to a great story. You can't always get what you want in life, and this portraited it nicely. I liked it

Wah, that is so sad! Yet I still loved it.

aw that was so sad T.T... i luv it! Go fuu/Jin rocks!

*Cries*That was so good!

aww... it's so sad... it's very good though! keep up the good work! although i wonder (yes, i'm quite dense) who's the husband?

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No! Not Fuu... *wipes tear* It was good! n_n

oh my god ...*sniffle*...that was so sad...*sobs*...u are evil...what happened to fuu...how did she die...but that although sad was beautifully written i hope there are more SC stories in the works...happier ones i hope...i also kinda wanted to know weather u just thought up of the idea of jin and fuu or u kinda saw that relationship builing within the series...anywho keep up the good work...:)

what? Soo Fuu is dead? This is really good!Update!

Really good, really sad brought tears to my eyes.

WONDERFUL! please continue

That was written lovely but sad is fuu really dead? Are u making this story a one shot or multi-chapter.

absolutely wonderful...i was almost in tears! this is a very new concept, very original. it was beautiful. thank you for the great read and keep up the good work :)

kimper :)

aw, that was so sad! well-written, i liked it.