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| TwistedSister03 2007-11-17 ch 5,  | abusei loved it great work! |
| joyce 2007-10-31 ch 5, anon. | abuseCan you please write another one, I quite like the story |
| csimiamifreako 2007-08-09 ch 2, | abuseAW, I LOVE THE MEMORIES OF SPEEDLE! SWEET STORY! RYAN IS SUCH A GEEK, BUT IN A VERY GOOD WAY! LOVE YA, RY!! |
| manny03 2006-09-15 ch 2, | abusehaha, ok i just had to tell you that i really loved this line: "She thinks he’s hot and she’d love to jump him, but there is more" lmao...such a Valera thing to say! xox ollie |
| Rakel-101 2006-08-23 ch 4, | abuseAw! this is very cute! I love the ship C/E and R/V is good aswell, this is definatly going on story alert! |
| csiwolfe08 2006-06-09 ch 4, | abuseCute story. I like the Ryan/Valera matchup. |
| Sandlel 2006-04-16 ch 5, | abuseOnly one thing. Creepyness. I mean that in the best way possible seriously :) |
| Manhattan SVU 2005-11-11 ch 5, | abuseWoah! Great story. Love the R/V pairing. Can't wait for another chapter. |
| shopping-luva91 2005-11-08 ch 5, | abuseThis is great writing. Please continue it! I love it! |
| tippyroo 2005-11-08 ch 5, | abuseBest chapter yet! Keep them coming :oD |
| Adamsgirl 2005-11-08 ch 5, | abusewoot that was hot! i love that chpt! keep it going... aw i love that she was waiting for him! |
| tippyroo 2005-11-07 ch 4, | abuseYay! Excellent work, keep it coming! :oD |
| randomwriting 2005-11-07 ch 3, | abuseThat was so very sad, but sweet & nicely written. I could imagine such a conversation. |
| randomwriting 2005-11-07 ch 2, | abuseFunny start... then I got sad thinking about Speed being dead. I prefer him not dead...oh, well... As for your story, it's enjoyable. Vaera has the funniest lines & thoughts. Nice job getting in everyone's head. Very snarky of Ryan to bring up the pot comment. |
| randomwriting 2005-11-07 ch 1, | abuse"We're going to church." Well, that was unexpected! Nice start. I can like Ryan if he's w/ Valera 'cause I really like her. You captured her nicely. |