 anabell-lee26692 2007-02-22 . chapter 1keep goin |
 -xanthia- 2005-11-24 . chapter 1 hey its awesome but u definitely need to update or else it doesnt really make much sense! but good story - looking forward to reading more of it!! |
 SerenityEmrys 2005-11-08 . chapter 1 Cool!
Update soon! |
 snowyskies 2005-11-07 . chapter 1This is showing a *lot* of promise! I can't wait to see how this continues! Keep going! |
 Res Nullius 2005-11-07 . chapter 1GASP! What do you mean, you MIGHT continue this??!! I don't care what the other people say! More more! I want more! I've been waiting for a story like this! WAITING! PLEASE! MORE! I beg of you! I'll do anything! MORE! MORE! MORE! MORE! Hurry, the next chapter! It's the only antidote before I go COMPLETELY insane! I REALLY want more! Update, please! PLEASE! With a cherry on top? PLease update! |
 G. Lonely 2005-11-07 . chapter 1that was pretty good. u should make the next chapter. i would like to find out what happens next. the only down fall is it needs more detail. but other than that, great :) |
 godricshollow 2005-11-07 . chapter 1Clever idea, but it needs some spit and shine. If you're leery of doing a 7th year fic, why not make it Harry looking back on his life and do a series of vignettes, one for each memory he collects. The basic idea, using the pensive and all, is very interesting! I hope you keep it up instead of abandoning the fic. |
 alix33 2005-11-07 . chapter 1Even though you are possibly very scared of doing a year seven book/FF, be a bit of a Gryffindor, use your so very promising beeginning and at least attempt the 'future developments' - as I'm very interested aas to where Harry will go to find memories of the night his parents died - and how he'll use it to find the other four horcruxes (and what they'll be) and how he will destroy them and kill Voldemort for 'the end result' |
 trev 2005-11-07 . chapter 1 u better continue it otherwise its pointless. MAKE IT INTERESTING IF U CONTINUE IT. DAMN INTERESTING. but neway v good writing. brill. i think u focus 2 much on making it like harry potter and not enuf on making it INTERESTING. HARRY POTTER IS NOT ALWAYS INTERESTING. FANFICTIONS ARE. but i really like it. write on ;-) |