Please update soon!

o.0 bad tifa. bad cloud. bad vincent. but most of all... BAD CLOUD! update soon!

I like it keep going ok.

Very good fic.

You've done a very realistic job of transfering

the characters into a different environment.

i'll be on the lookout for anything else under you're name.

You're alive! Yay! Damn those evil people... they didn't review... you should have like thirty or fourty reviews already! I just don't get it... Anyway... Poor Tifa. What's Vincent gonna do when he finds out about her cutting? Will he stay? Will she find out what he does for a living? And if she does, will she try to stop him? Well, wonderful chapter here. Update soon!

Shikaku Zetsumei

Yah... i don't really get it... this is a great story and no one seems to review... ah well... it happens soon people will read more frequently!

Anyways... nice chapter! i liked the whole scene with Uma, what's gonna happen next? Will Vincent stay with her? When will he find out about Cloud? When will she find out about his job? What'll her reaction be like? Will Vincent try to kill Cloud? Will Cloud show up? Will Zetsumei stop asking freakin' questions?

UPDATE SOON!

Shikaku Zetsumei

Wow... sad... poor Tifa. When will Vincent find out what happened? Will Cloud come crawling back? Ooh! Nice little plot line would be after Tifa and Vincent's relationship develops a bit, Cloud comes back thinking Tifa will still love him! Well, update soon!

Shikaku Zetsumei

Loved the first chapter. Had me very interested in your story. Can't wait to continue reading the rest!

wonderful beginning, and i'd love to read more, please add more

Yah! You used my idea! That's awesome! Are they staying at the same hotel too? What's he gonna do when he meets her? UPDATE SOON!

Shikaku Zetsumei

gud job)umm 10/10?relli confused?

hey jodeci!hehehehehe!lolz anyway it is really good...even though i was half aslep when i read it!lolz jks jks it was good bye bye

Nice... nice... it's pretty interesting. A good plot idea to get the two together again would be something along the lines of her being depressed enough to work at the inn and she sees Vincent killing the guy he's supposed to kill. Update soon!

Shikaku Zetsumei

The beginning was promising but I think Vincent's personality needed a little more grit. The train ride was alright but Tifa's eagerness to talk bordered on annoying. I see potential in your story and look foward to the next chapter.

I'm liking it so far, so update soon!