Man, I just re-read Here is Greenwood, and decided to check for any fanfiction and found this. Hope you update it again someday!

"The tape is how they observe the

letter of the law while trampling all over its spirit."

i love this line!

Yep entire thing was well written

Except for f word things seemed IC fine. Perhaps even that line was understandable in situation even if I felt it OOC. You are the author and know character better than I do.

Really good

Yeah perhaps good

Well done.

Quite good.

Hahaha nice.

Yeah not terrible.

Yep nice perhaps

*applauds*

Good maybe

Great

Excellent