Wonderfully written! You really made this feel authentic- the emotions between the two of them. You have a beautiful style and a way of making them come to life.

I LOVED IT! So, so good.

wow brillant, beautiful. and thats all there is to say.

Very sweet. I liked it.

Wow! I loved it!! Would Goren really pick her lock? Probably. Love the Bobby stutter. LOL. Keep up the good work.

better than decent. fantastic. i hadn't read it before but came to find the forum as a place where writing would be posted that would be at least close to grammatically correct. this was awesome. "leaving her soul on him" that is such a great line.

I love romantic BA stories, and ITWSH was such a great episode for spawning wonderful fanfic like yours! My favorite part:
**“But,” he said quietly, reaching up to touch one of the thin streams and coming away to stare at the resulting drop momentarily. “You didn’t. Y-you wanted to and you never did. You changed your mind, you said.”**
Something about that is so perfectly Bobby. Thanks for sharing!
-Nancy

it's really, really decent. i enjoyed reading this a lot.

It's hopeful and it makes me happy ^^ Very well-written.

Wow. This was beautiful!! Just beautiful!! -sigh-
I love the use of the anecdote. I love how you got into the character's heads, and how you resolved the issue...(can't go wrong with them kissing), it was just excellenct!

I Love it!

Very nice job! We all knew a lot of fics would arise from that ep. --there was just so much going on emotionally for B/A -- and I love reading e-1's "take" on it all: happy, sad, angsty, supportive. They proved again they're a great team and your story certainly did them justice.

wonderful !

"In the Wee Small Hours" was one of my most favorite episodes because it showed them to be human. I'm just glad people took it upon themselves to use this episode in their stories.

That is really super. Yes, it shows. it is really good. I enjoyed it! The Courtroom scene was one of my favorites. It was really sweet and emotional.