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Reviews For: Remember What I Told You

The Fiffth Marauder
2007-05-19
ch 1,
abuseaw
this was such an adorable story!!
i loved it!
so cute
and james is so stubbon
aw
so yeah
love,
Ale
whitewolf33
2006-06-18
ch 1,
abuseAWW! Such a cute yet realistic view on James and Lily's marriage from Sirius and James' standing. I realy loved it! It twas AWESOME! Keep up the good work! ^_^
JKLB
2006-04-18
ch 1,
abuseEverything about this fic is perfect. I love the way that James is so preoccupied by pre-wedding jitters that he actually forgts his wand and is slow on the uptake with the map comment. I love the way Sirius can be serious and funny at the same time (the map comment for example). A perfect James and Sirius moment.
AmazinglyMe
2006-04-01
ch 1,
abuseI thought this was fantasmically stupendiful. :D

Sirius and James were really in character. For some reason, one of my favorite parts was when James realized he didn't have his wand and Sirius had to give it to him. I don't know why.

Anyway, it was AWESOME.

~ AmazinglyMe
prettiermusings
2006-03-10
ch 1,
abuseThis was nice. It was more low-key and somber; very different from the usual things I read...I like the more serious side of Sirius (there really is no way to get around the serious Sirius pun, is there?). Usually he's written as a really flippant person, but here he's so much more adult. And James, as well.

Nice job, I definitely enjoyed reading.
Green Eyed Lady
2005-11-28
ch 1,
abuseI'm off to do the detective work, because I think the picture's influence MADE the story. What I mean is, the fic was good, but - and you know as well as I do, I'm sure, or better - it would have lacked a hook, a punch, and a visual without the setting.

"Everyone thinks we’re just doing this to defy them." The idea that people might think James and Lily were marrying just to give a great big rude-hand-gesture to the purist part of the community is an interesting one. Actually I rather like it. It gives some grounds for Malfoy still remembering them as "meddlesome fools." I'm more divided on the idea that "the old pattern" was Sirius criticizing Lily. Or did I interpret that wrong, and it was Sirius just having a habit of criticizing generally?

Sirius's voice, was, in fact, just dead-on. Although there were few overlapping themes and *no* forced, cliched parallels at all (naturally, coming from you) I could really hear the Sirius of GoF and OotP (which is light-years away from fanon Sirius). "I don't suppose a lie would mollify you?"

And the whole tone was really good - subdued. It threw me off guard, I usually expect the laugh riots with you, but you definitely handled this more somber tone terrifically.
LookIt'saProngs
2005-11-28
ch 1,
abuseThis was a great story! A very unique story, which is hard to find in most writters, I enjoyed reading this a lot.
dana-maru1
2005-11-08
ch 1,
abuseAw this is really good - you should continue with it!
Twerksie
2005-11-08
ch 1,
abuse*claps enthusiastically*

I swear, you think up the most creative things.

This was uberly great. Ah, Sirius. Such a cutie.
VegaVarekai
2005-11-07
ch 1,
abuseBravo! What can i say? That was wonderfully written, and the concept was great. Precisely why i love the Marauder Era so much. Well done!
~Vega
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