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Empathic Slytherin
2008-07-09
ch 1,
abuseI love this fanfiction story! please continue writing?

ami
doctorlit
2008-07-01
ch 38,
abusePersonally, I would want to split the story up into three pieces, since that would look better on your homepage. But then, you already have quite a few stories on yours, and there is something to be said for keeping it a package deal. I guess it's ultimately up to what you think is best.
Caellach Tiger Eye
2008-06-30
ch 38,
abuseI have to say, I really do NOT like your Hermione. She's petty, selfish, conceited and obnoxious.

I hate the way you killed Boromir. I actually liked his oroginal death better - at least he died a hero ... bah! Is there anyone who writes a story good as this in which he actually LIVES? Still, it will nonetheless create an interesting plot device, since Hermione actually killed him in her stupid, childish arrogance.

Pity about Theodred, but we know it was bound to happen. Sirius is going to MURDER Wormtongue - he made him promise not to let the prince die. Poor Eowyn ... she doesn't know Theodred loved her - although I really wanted Sirius and her to get together.

Interesting about Draco. He succumbs to the 'dark' even further - patricide is no small sin to commit.

So Harry, Ron and Dumbledore will travel their own path altogether, huh? Wasn't expecting that .. but it'll be good. A new storyline will be interesting to read here. This is, by far, one of the best-written stories about LOTR, especially a HP/LOTR crossover, that I've ever seen. Curious, indeed ...

Hope you resolve the Remus and Tonks plotline soon. I know it's hard, but you can't pretend it doesn't exist - it will have to eventually converge with the main story arc.

There we go. Tiring to write, but worth it! I wish you luck with the next chapter. gODSPEED!
Padme4000
2008-05-17
ch 37,
abusethis was a brilliant chapter and another evil cliff hangar
vuzznut
2008-05-16
ch 37,
abusehey it great that you are back, i can't wait for the chapter and i have question is aragorn some how related to Salazar Slythering and Voldermort? any please update soon. love your story.
Demonic-Dragon-Eyed-Chick
2008-05-12
ch 37,
abuseAh, it has been awhile...Well this was really good. I want to hear more soon, please!
DDEC
grace1237
2008-03-01
ch 36,
abuseGood story! Hope to see more of this soon...it's not quite like any HP/LOTR crossover I've read before...
Demonic-Dragon-Eyed-Chick
2008-02-29
ch 36,
abuseAww (sobs) I feel so bad! Poor Ginny and Draco...Ah well, awesome chapter, I do hope you'll update soon.
Padme4000
2008-02-26
ch 36,
abusei loved it
Alcina vom Steinsberg
2008-02-26
ch 1,
abuseI'm following the updates for this story for some time now, though I find only now the time to read it properly from the start. I prefer reviewing, too, after actually having read a chapter and not only glanced over it...

I've never read a LotR-Crossover before, because I simply didn't think this could work. It is certainly not easily done, but so far, I have the impression that you are managing really well.

The opening appeals to me very much: you build up some suspense nicely, and your drawing of the characters so far is really good. I love your Wormtail, I can just see Timothy Spall bowing before the Dark Lord there...
Blue-Starlight92
2008-02-07
ch 35,
abuseThis is a very good, well written story. I like it.
Caellach Tiger Eye
2008-02-05
ch 35,
abuseThat chapter was ... unexpectedly dark. I wasn't expecting the way in which HErmione was treated, or what Ron saw, or even several other reactions and that.

(Stupid Galadriel, insulting poor Hermione, my fave fem character, just because she loves knowledge. Harry and Ron are right - the elves should just go jump some cliffs. Then again, I'm curious.)

It's a real pity you won't save Boromir - nobody who does it ever wrties a really good story with it, and this may have been it. Then again, Boromir's human pride, which caused him to deny Galadriel's power and hate the elves, is indeed what killed him in the end. Still, it's a good story.

I look forward to the next chapter, my breath is bated.

gODSPEED!

(P.S. PLEASE don't let Legolas and HErmione get together, I HATE Legolas pairings! Then again, I also dislike Haldir and Galadriel for being so shallow regarding Hermione, so I'm ... conflicted ...)
coolmarauders
2008-02-05
ch 35,
abuseHoly crap. Wow. I loved that chapter! I loved Galadriel's conversations with everyone. Especially Merry and Pippin. And Ron! Holy freaking crap! That was so amazing with his reaction to seeing Ginny. Wow. I can't wait to read more! (Wow, I was extremely eloquent that time. Gotta work on my vocabulary usage in reviews...and lessen up on the exclamation points.)

Moony
Demonic-Dragon-Eyed-Chick
2008-02-05
ch 35,
abuseHm. Not how I would have chosen to write this chapter, but we'll see how it plays out. I hopw to hear more of Ginny soon.
I'm really happy you updated and I hope the next one will happen faster! See you later!
DDEC
Ms. Unknown
2008-02-05
ch 35,
abusegreat chapter.
its different from how people usually interpret certain characters; really nice.
update soon.
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