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Emperor Vanquest
2008-07-23
ch 1,
abusefound the story a few days agao...read it in one night, till round 4AM. Needless to say I was tired at work...but! It was well worth it. Can't wait to see the next installment!
Itallia
2008-07-12
ch 9,
abuseThis story is interesting, though I wonder why Harry didn't do more to get Dumbledore's meddling out of the way. I guess when you live as long as he has, you realize that small nuisances like that will come and pass just as everything else does. I wonder how hard it will be to watch his family die.
Thornclaw18
2008-07-07
ch 9,
abuseLol. That has to be one of the most amusing fanfictions that I've ever read. Completely off-the-wall amazing! Well, thanks for the read, and I hope to see some new chapters up if you're still writing. Good luck!!
Senyor Fier Mensheir
2008-07-06
ch 9,
abuseSo does he ever reveal himself to be who he truly is?
I loved reading that which you have written thus far. I shall impatiently be awaiting your next chapter.
Mechconstrictor
2008-06-26
ch 9,
abuseVery good story. I look forward to more. Just out of curiosity, how many chapters are there going to be? I like the Harry/Marie pairing. Keep up the good work.
Holen-Snape
2008-06-25
ch 9,
abuseWicked, so what will happen to Dumbles now that there is no dark wizzard for him to beet and no harry at school for him to control? Did snape get sent to prison or did dumbles get him off for attacking the longbottoms? can not wait to read more. thank you
Jewelle2
2008-06-23
ch 9,
abuseGood chapter... its really nice that you didn't end this story with Harry's defeat of Voldemort. I'm looking forward to seeing the Potter's and Longbottom's slapdown Dumbledore and all. Hope you update again soon.
Mrs. Invisible
2008-06-17
ch 1,
abusecool.
that's all i can say now.
cool...
Kalen Darkmoon
2008-06-16
ch 9,
abuseInteresting story. The only problem I really see is that Harry's solitude for so many millennia would have left him with very questionable sanity. Humans are very social creatures and even a few years isolation can render a man/woman mad. You've portrayed Harry having long stretches of being alone and/or tortured (like the Prometheus part) but seemed to ignore any effect that should have had upon his psyche.

Initially I was a bit upset with the meaningless "death" of Marie, but was happy to see that she was restored later. If anyone deserves companionship it's someone who managed to survive more than a hundred-thousand years of loneliness and somehow retained their sanity through it all.

Yes, I understand you had him breeding women left and right throughout the years but that is most certainly NOT the same thing as having a true companion. Someone you can really share your life with. His physical "needs" may have been met but his mental and emotional needs were pretty much ignored. There is a reason most hermits are considered crazy. It's because most of the time they really are - either before going into solitude or as a result of that solitude.

Aside from that aspect, the story has been pretty good and certainly is quite original. I'll be watching for more of this.
TrowGundam
2008-06-13
ch 9,
abuseOMG, Great story. I just say a link from to this story from a Yahoo! Group I subscribe to and I remembered reading Mastermind Hunting (Which I loved also). I decided to read this one and I must say I love how you have mixed historical fact, mythology, and fiction. I can't wait to read more.
lantana
2008-06-12
ch 9,
abuseMarvelous story! I especially loved the Mark Twain-ish history of mankind you gave in the first chapters. Looking forward to read more!
Slytherin's Pimp
2008-05-29
ch 9,
abuseExcept that stuff about Jesus...I like it a lot. This is a good fanfiction, even if Harry Potter affected the entire world. Update asap. I want to know if Harry will reveal the truth to his parents. It would be nice to know their reactions.
Tarrin
2008-05-20
ch 9,
abuseExcellent story, eagerly waiting for the next update.
jumping-jo
2008-05-18
ch 8,
abuseloved this story until you added the xmen element for some reason it just doesn't sit right being a crossover thats just my opinion though its not a flame
Lyonnyte
2008-05-12
ch 9,
abuseFun story! Please continue
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