So...I wrote this single chapter seven years ago. The 13-year old me couldn't comprehend the simple concept of uploading.

Re-reading this, parts of it make me want to cringe, while other parts I'm kinda proud of.

I think I just might restart this whole entire project, because I feel bad leaving this lying here to rot.

This is a good chapter, but I don't feel like reading it five times in a row though. What happens next? It's been seven years and nothing! You started out doing SO well. Anyway...good for trying...

All the chapters are literally the same! That kind of annoyed me. Ok, that's an understatement!

Ah

This is not fun finding out all 5 chapters are exactly the same. I wanted to read a good story. I like the summary part thing that shows up under the title so i clicked on it to read a good story. Plz fix it very soon. All people interested in this would love to read a good story w/ 5 DIFFERENT chapters.

thanks for attemting to write. bye. :-(

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Ah

SCREAMING.

Um. what is happening? Chapter 4 is the same as the last 3. Nothing is changing. I want to find out more and read a good story. plz fix it soon. thanks for attempting to write. bye.

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um it happened again! Chapter 3 is the same as the last one. I'm never going to figure out what happens if this keeps on happening. plz fix it soon. If i find out in a sec that it happens again on chapter 4 i will go crazy/ scream( well not really since my mom is asleep). thanks for attempting to write. bye. :-(

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um hello! Act 2/ chapter 2 is EXACTLY THE SAME as Act 1. Plz fix it soon. Act 1 was so interesting and i want to find out more. thanks for writing. bye. :-)

Good story, but you posted the same chapter 5 times. o.O But it was awesome. Please continue writing!

Damn...I wrote this a long time ago. I suppose I should continue after all those years, but I'd need to watch the films again to get back into it.

I'm flattered that, amid all the mediocre fanfiction on this site, some of you consider this one of the best. You'll be happy to know I plan on continuing. I would like some help on uploading, obviously. Anyone like to help me out?

Wait. I'm confused. Did you post the same chapter twice? Maybe you should

check this story.

Wow. This is really cool! It's neat how you put in the movie format like

it was really part 4. keep writing!

Good story. Can't wait til thew next part. But why are all the upload thingys the same?

Great 1st chapter, but the other 4 are identical to it!

Not bad. Keep it up.

Good story, but you've got a few problems with the uploading.