Reviews for A Silent Garden

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meepers369 2007-02-24 ch 39,	abuseThat was beautiful. I really can't think of anything else to say. Maybe explaining that I just read the original and the sequel in the past hour can give credit to how much I enjoyed reading this story. =)
Sonar 2006-09-19 ch 3,	abuseI love the first drabble. It was so cute.
Chips Dip 2006-05-12 ch 4,	abuseO this was a romantic chappie! I like it. ^^ -Amy
Chips Dip 2006-05-12 ch 3,	abuseIt was in a way kinda random but good. ^^ -Amy
Chips Dip 2006-05-12 ch 2,	abuseO this chappie was good too! But if I could make a suggestion, make your chappies a bit longer. ^^ -Amy
Chips Dip 2006-05-12 ch 1,	abuseAwwe Cute begininng! I like it! ^^ -Amy
Dextral 2006-02-26 ch 39,	abuseTo be completely honost, I thought Kiba was a bit out of character, but that may possibly just be my perspective. Oh well, whatever. However, you did capture a certain sadness that is rarely exposed in such drabble fanfictions or even any fanfiction alike. It was almost, I dunno, violently so. Silently, but violently. It was like, it was so much built up emotions that made it full of violence, yet all of it was tuned down and hidden so that it was almost silent...you know what I'm saying? No, of coarse you don't. No one does. Also, I'm confused as to what happened to Hinata. I know I probably should have got it as it's poetic and such, but I just didn't understand what happened. I had thought she might've tried to kill herself, but yeah. I dunno.
Zoe A. W. 2006-02-09 ch 39,	abusewoah! that was a really great story! i can tell that you have a gift keep at it. the only thing that i would change is try to put something resembeling flashback. i got a bit confused. other then that thought great work.
Kuu-sama 2006-02-03 ch 4,	abuseWhat's with me finding all these gorgeous drabble fics late? Am I just oblivious? (Don't answer that.) But they are gorgeous. So I hope you don't mind me adding them to my C2.
Rachel 2006-01-21 ch 39, anon.	abuseluv this so much!! Kiba and Hinata! Awesome story
Genial Hinata 2005-12-17 ch 39,	abuseSalutations. I just wanted to thank you for this story. You captured Kiba and Hinata both very well and I really enjoyed your perspective on them. Not many people capture the essence of the characters, you didn't change Hinata, you let her grow, and Kiba was amazingly well done. It was a very nice story, I hope you will do another one like this. So few words, but they were beautiful. claps Very well done. -Genial Hinata
Fantastical Queen Ebony Bla... 2005-12-16 ch 38,	abuseLovely and itrigueing last line. A well written little bit, lets us know whats going. :)
Fantastical Queen Ebony Bla... 2005-12-12 ch 37,	abuseSweet, but not overly so. It's very nice, and again, human. Kind of dreamy. Some beautiful lines.
Fantastical Queen Ebony Bla... 2005-12-08 ch 34,	abuseOkay, so if I'm right, Hinata was in an accident of sorts and is now crippled or injured so she can't move right now? At first I thought she'd been raped or something... a relief in a way. I like this chapter. Needed insight. Well done. Oh, by the way, I downloaded that Feist song (couldn't find the other one) - I like it, its nice... pretty...
Fantastical Queen Ebony Bla... 2005-12-08 ch 33,	abuseAgain, very nice dialogue, though I am slightly confused. I like how you're including Hanabi. If anything, it seems a bit thin... some more details would be nice. Lovely though!

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