i like that...how the watcher is still there...

Very good, quite gripping. I thought it was interesting how Elladan is talking about how Estel knows only a few of his sides and not all of them.

Absolutely creepy and well written.

//And yet, deep down in the very foundations of the hill, a spirit slumbered, ready to be awakened by wanderers who would pass by on the right night of the year, ready to be sacrificed.//

It gave me shivers just reading it.

Ugh!! Im scared,what a nice Halloween story!

It is good! And it's one of my favourite kind of stories - Elladan is protecting Estel even he's hurt. And I just like how it ends, you show Elladan as a strong and smart elf! Are you planning any stories? I hope to read more like this, more about Elladan and Estel and with actions.

Wow, this is truly amazing! I cannot believe I did not read it before! I coulda sworn I had. Guess not.
But I love this! You're descriptions are brilliant. I love how you spoke about the shadows and about Elladan's possession. You are an amazing writter. ^^
This was very original, too. I haven't read anything like it at all. I'm gald everything turned out well in then end. ^^ Lol, I love the joking at the end, too. ^^ It was different not having Elrohir with them, too used to them being togehter, but that definitely is not a bad thing that he wasn't... I was just saying... ^^;;
But amazing job! I absolutely love it. ^^
Keep up the amazing work! I can't wait 'til your next update! ^^
Ja ne ^_~

Good job. I was on the edge of my seat.
Very well written.
*MornieGalad*

Awesome story! I loved how creepy it is, and then Elladan as the killer at the end...whoo! Gave me chills. Really great job, thank you for sharing.

Very good story about Estel and Elladan,a spooky too. I love how you wrote the two of them, the older brother and the young Estel. Love the part that Estel only know Elladan as a brother, a teacher, a friend, but not as a killer. great story.

This is a wonderful story, Alina. Great imagery, as usual. You create good suspence and hold it thoruhout. It was worthy of being a winner. Congratulations!

Terrific beginning, setting the tone for the rest of the story. Excellent overall. I was thinking, 'No, Estel. DON'T go up there!" But what fun would it have been if he hadn't? Love your writing.