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too-much-inspiration
2008-06-27
ch 6,
abuseExciting, I have enjoyed reading this so far. Please add more, I would like to see where this will end up.
AlbinoChocobo
2008-03-22
ch 6,
abuseCome to think of it, Danny probably would be a dodge-ball god because of ghost fighting. I'm gonna have to put you on author alert, aren't I?
The Hollow Inside
2008-02-19
ch 6,
abusePlease update! I really like this story so far!!
ceres
2007-12-30
ch 6, anon.
abuseive been waiting for a review for the last couple of years get ur act together and finish this story u started u finish. sorry a little bit of an anger issue. i love danny phantom stories and u are just sittin there twiddling ur thumbs. i know im not the only one who has sent u a message
A Bibliophile
2007-11-27
ch 6,
abuseSo good! Gimme More!
ATLA4life
2007-11-05
ch 6, anon.
abuseupdate please! tell me you didnt give up on this fic! why must the good end before they're supposed to??!! i cant wait to see valeries reaction to danny being phantomm!
Amitra
2007-09-09
ch 6, anon.
abuseReview poke! Just put this in a word file so when my internet goes I will be able to read this till I barf!

*salutes*

Rock on oh great one!
DPcrazy
2007-08-19
ch 6,
abusePlease tell me that you haven't given up on this story!
mystery writer5775
2007-07-19
ch 6,
abusewow, you should finish this story, it's really good and also scary, of course i love a good scare, and i so can't wait for Danny to be a full phantom, it will make it so much easier
Fantasy93
2007-07-06
ch 1,
abuseyesh danny and valerie pic!
Shoot You Down
2007-03-28
ch 1,
abuseLokiWaterDraca wanted me to come down here and flame you. So, here I am.

I actually feel a bit of pity sinking through me as I type this. People actually thought this work is good? It's truly beyond me why they thought that because this story is one of the worst I've seen in a long while. How about you take it down and delete it? Might do us all a favor if you do. We wouldn't have to see the major mess that you claim is writer. By the way, reviews that just say, "omg!1 u r a grate wrighter!!1" don't count. When you get some good reviews telling you why and how you were good you know you did something right. My review right now is telling you that your work is unwanted here.

Love,
SYD
LilShyxSweetGal08
2007-01-06
ch 6,
abuseomg i freakin love this story! lol especially this last part and the locker room scene was my fave :P since i love it when stuff like that happens :D anyways i kno u get this a lot but plz update soon! i mean i'll still be interested in it no matter what but still i wanna see what ur evil little mind can come up with :P lol oh btw if u have aim i'd love to chat with ya sometimes :D cause i used to have it...remember Allison from Tennessee...maybe u'll remember, lol anyways welcome to my faves! lol
Linda
2006-12-07
ch 6, anon.
abuseAnd you stopped this one too! Do you enjoy torturing me by stopping really good stories? Aww man!
DPRRluvJ13MM
2006-11-14
ch 3,
abuseAnother good chappie! I like Evanescence so it's cool that some of thier lyrics are in here! *continues reading*
DPRRluvJ13MM
2006-11-13
ch 2,
abusePoor Dany and Valerie! I gotta keep reading! *keeps reading*
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