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As the cherry blossom falls
2008-05-16
ch 30,
abuseOh my god! I loved both endings. I WEPT during the first one. But I love greg so much that I like the second one more!

No story has ever made me cry before!

BRAVO!
Sandlesloveblooms
2007-12-22
ch 31,
abuseI enjoyed this story it was really good! I love the ending of chapter 31. It's funny!
CryHope
2007-07-22
ch 31,
abuseHeya..

Okay... so I'm immensely more cheerful now with this ending. No tears... nope! Just a silly grin for me! Great job with this story. I really like the plot and twist and turn. I'll be patiently waiting for your newest update for "Ties".

Bo-
CryHope
2007-07-22
ch 30,
abuseNaturally I cried like a baby in this ending. Man.. that was heartwrenching. I'm sort of worried now that if you're able to kill off Greg in this story.. what future angst can you procure for him in the Happy Enough series...

But I'm thankful that there's another ending. Hopefully it's the happy ending one. So I'll just skip on down there.

bo-
aj
2007-04-14
ch 31, anon.
abuseThe second ending was MUCH better!
PisceanPal23
2007-03-19
ch 31,
abuseIt's been two days to read it all, and I know its a tad late, but WOW! This story was super terrific, and had me guessing every step of the way! I loved it, you're an amazing writer! SUPER job!
Dybdahl
2006-10-15
ch 31,
abuseThe first ending was the perfect ending, but the second? That's the ending you hope for, if for nothing else then to get a happy feeling and smile like an idiot for several minuts.

Anyways, I love ths story, and I regret having taken this long to finish reading it.
Dybdahl
2006-10-15
ch 26,
abuseI have to give it to you, you really know how to make me cry.
hollie
2006-08-24
ch 31, anon.
abuseWow. I loved this story so much. It took me awhile to read, but I really enjoyed it. I thought both endings were amazing, but I personally liked the second one better, just cause I'm a sucker for happy endings. This story made me cry so much! But in a good way. I wouldn't have cried unless it was really good, which it was. So kudos on writing such an awesome story.
ObessedTWFan
2006-08-13
ch 31,
abuseReally 100% like this ending better. But both complete the story well. Excellent, Magnificant, Terrific, Wonderful, Breathtaking, Amazing job, pick one or take them all.
ObessedTWFan
2006-08-13
ch 30,
abuseSo the water works finally started. Wow, not sure what to say, the endings could make or break the story, and it definetely made it. Excellent Job
ObessedTWFan
2006-08-13
ch 29,
abuseThe waitings over or his life is over, you're starting to scare me now. This chapter was a tear jerker, for me anyways i could feel them coming. Terrific.
ObessedTWFan
2006-08-13
ch 28,
abuseAw, and so it begins the winding down of the story, Magnificant job
ObessedTWFan
2006-08-13
ch 27,
abuseRunning out of good compliments to say here, chapter was breathtaking - that's a new one. Had me on the edge of my seat. Only a couple more chapters to go
ObessedTWFan
2006-08-13
ch 26,
abuseHoly S*, I finally mean what "In the end all you see is blue" Stomach dropped a bit, and excited at the same time, never fails i figure out who the killer is just moments before its revealed. Amazing Job and yes onto the next
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