Ooh, that last one had me getting all squirmy in my seat. VERY HOT. Of course the ending made me want to punch Mal for River's sake, but that's expected. :D

::off to read the rest::

I love Mal/River. I love how difficult (perfect) it is, how much heat and fear there is in this pairing. And my, do I ever love your handling of it!

The ratings a little low in my opinion but I'm not offended by the content. I love how you wrote this it's very tense and inticing all the same. I just love anything Mal/River.

more please

I like these stories even more than your Jayne/River series; Jayne and River is a pairing I just can't get my head around, but I still enjoy your writing, but Mal and River makes a freaky kind of sense, especially written like this. Hope to see more.

Foolish, stubborn Mal. Can't wait for the next instalment.

wow

HonorableMal to the rescue once again. Stupid Mal! (Lovely fic.)

I love Mal/River, and I'm so happy you are writing these!

These are wonderful stories and could almost make a Mal/River fan out of me. Please keep writing them, I may be converted yet.

*Thud*