SO SAD!:'-( *cry*
WHY MUST THAT HAPPEN??! WHY MUST HE DIE?! IT IS SO CRUEL!
Anyway, your style is very, very good! Every time i read it I burst out in tears. Well, i´m a very emotional guy!
Write more, but please something, that isn´t so sad next time!

Brief but heartwrenching. A good glance into his last thoughts.

Heart wrenching. Both your story and this segment in the comics. Absolutely heart wrenching. Painful, yet we read on. You have captured this part in the comics perfectly. I add it to my favorites quickly.
-Storm Rain

Ehaa, that part of the comics always makes me so FURIOUS. ;-; You've captured it beautifully; a job well-done.

It's so very beautiful and so sad! He can't even cry - but I'm sure I will. The picture you draw is breaking my heart!

Snasen fanfic! Hvorfor finnes ikke mer witch egentlig? Er de så forbaska treige borte i statene?

Your story hit me right in the solarplexus and that doesn't happen very frequently to me. I love it!

Oh, I'm getting bored. Isn't anybody going to write a CedricxElyon fanfiction? CedricxPhobos just ain't good enough.

Bittersweet, most likely the first fanfic for a non-anime series that rightfully deserves shounen-ai instead of yaoi. Kind of depressing, and filled with PhoboCeddy goodness.

I add to my favorites list with glee.

Oh my goodness. Wrenching, absolute melacholy.

Woah... I've just starting getting into and seeking out the series, but damn... I am very impressed. This is the kind of story that hooks people just introduced to it. Great!

not bad ur a great writer

though i was hoping for something a bit more...physical. think kissing & stuff

mabye you shoud write out a :passionate: moment >:)

all in all good job

This is a pretty interesting story! Well written and descriptive, with few grammatical errors. Like it. ^_^