 Shiva 2006-07-29 . chapter 6 Hi . . . um, it's a good story, but you've got something wrong in the first part, in CPR, it's actually a good thing to break the ribs, if you don't you aren't hitting hard enough . . . personally, I would prefer broken ribs to a stopped heart, and why don't you have them give the students tranfusions of logan's blood? It would work quicker.
Oh by the way, what are the names of your other stories? |
 Flight Of Silence wings 2006-02-06 . chapter 4Your lucky if your school sells naked fruit juice, all we get at my school is artificial junk thats mostly flavorings and dye. Electric blue fruit punch pepole, Its not normal. Anyway, I love the fic, Im going to have to find time to read your other ones. And I think I know what's making everyone sick, but I'm not talking... :P |
 madisonavenue 2006-02-02 . chapter 4Need..more..JOTT! But it looks like its coming so its all good! I did this CSI thing at school today and its really cool! Had to dress up in white suits with the gloves masks and even shoes lmao. Was extremly funny, but we learnt how to take fingerprints and stuff like that...oh yeah, im mentioning this because you mentioned CSI in your last chapter. Great so far...back to my original comment...needs more jott, in my opinion, its your story though. Im glad you aren't a major Rogue fan like the rest of the world seems to be...or I don't think you are, are you? Anywhoo...update soon, xmadisonx |
 Raphaella 2005-11-10 . chapter 1Lol, I really loved the exchange of insults between the x men and 'hoods, made me laugh. Great writing style, I hope to read more soon (no play on words there, heh) |
 mooopower 2005-11-08 . chapter 1wow, good so far m really likin this story, great job! Can't wait for chapter two! |
 madisonavenue 2005-11-08 . chapter 1Tis good, hope there is JOTT in this story (JOTT LOVER!) sorry! Great start though, please update soon. xmaddisonx |
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