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| Christine Writer 2006-08-28 ch 1, | abuseGood story!! Keeps with the movie well. |
| Rasa Rainboweyes 2005-11-15 ch 1, | abuseAw thats soo sad. After I saw that film I hated Ani so much. I made him on the sims and burnt him to death as soon as I got home. It made me feel much better. Anyway the story, it's good but I don't think you meant 'excepted him' but 'accepted him'. Sorry but I don't want you to get a big head from all the praise I give you for the other stories. R.R. |
| Zenda-clone 2005-11-09 ch 1, anon. | abuseToo cool for words.And i love it in storys or movies where when on the phone with someone the other person moans and the person on the phone is like"did i disturb some thing" very classic. Write more |
| TxPmP04 2005-11-09 ch 1, | abuseI really like the concept of this story, I just wish it was longer and elaberated more. I think it would be really kool to have more of a back story of them possible training together or even have been in a few battles together to make the fight between them mean more than just another Jedi that must be killed. Good job |
| kingskipper 2005-11-09 ch 1, | abuseVery good story. I like how it was a little sub-story of ROTS. Good writing technique and I like the perspective it was told from. The descriptive fight scene was also well written with good details that make my imagination run wild. The earlier part of the story was also interesting, how it old of Anakin finding a friend in another Jedi. Well written story, hope to hear more from this author. |