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Reviews for: Flawless
Eyedentity Crysis
2006-07-06 . chapter 1
Cool, I like it. ^^ Nice job! Original to, I've never seen one like this. Great work! ^_^
bluerosety
2005-12-18 . chapter 1
It was cute, very nice I loved it! ^_^
Rayz Kitty
2005-12-01 . chapter 1
good fic, just don't like da kaityson pairin, sorry, i'm not a yaoi fan
YuriyTalaIvanov
2005-11-13 . chapter 1
huh? Why does kai need braces??! and what does tyson think is perfect?
Liah-chan
2005-11-11 . chapter 1
aw how adorable! I loved the jokes on kai tho LOL! - not like im dissing people with braces! my friend used to have them! - but anyway, the ending was - guess what? PERFECT! lol
Liah xx
NekoAnime
2005-11-10 . chapter 1
This was utterly sweet, not to mention ORIGINAL, and I loved every word of it. ^_^ I must check out your other stories now. And you say you have 2 other Tykas? Wooho. I loved seeing Kai having a hissy fit. It was funny to read. I just adored the way that you portrayed him here. I'm positive that Ranma-sama is going to love this. I laughed when I pictured Tyson doing a Hillary pose. He was a little mean with the lightning rod comment. ^^; And where he did the Hillary pose and poor Rei was confused. That seen was just awesome. I hope to see more TyKa stories soon, this was really great. This is exactly what I needed to get me in the mood to sit down and read the hordes of fiction I have sitting in m inbox. Thank you!!
TechnoRanma
2005-11-10 . chapter 1
*stars and sparkles and ribbons and rice and stuff shoots everywhere* YOu! YOU ARE MY GIRL! THIS THIS WAS- I LOVED IT! Yu rock thank you so much for writing this! Thank you so much for writin' TyKa!! Your talent never looked so hot before you wrote this ^_~! *offers live sacrifces for more TyKa* 4-Ever! 2-Gether! Keep it up! This fic it was just ..Flawless!
SoulSister
2005-11-10 . chapter 1
reading this went against everything I stand for in this fandom but... it was... -twicthes- ... strangely... gah, cute?!? -bangs on forehead-
... -coughs- ...
anyways, despite my misgivings about the pairing, it was a really cute story. I really want to see a pic of Kai with braces now, it makes for an interesting image in my head ^.^;
Caffeine Luc
2005-11-10 . chapter 1
I'm not a fan of this pairing, at all. But this adorable, unrefusable plot just seemed to make it fit. And that's a good thing to be able to do the whole plot over pairing thing. Very well done.
The concept of this is really very unique, very original and I'm glad I read it. It really lifted my spirits after a depressing week, absolutely hilarious.
You really made Kai seem human. I mean you see him in fics everywhere, being cold and completely unfeeling, I think I do that myself. But the way you showed his anger and insecurity really made him seem relatable.
Kai isn't exempt from imperfections, oh gods this is great.
Ereshkigali
2005-11-09 . chapter 1
"You're a walking lightning rod now!"
OMG, I think I actually laughed out loud there.
Totally brilliant idea. So original (and originality is NOT something you find often these days in fics). Gotta love TyKa, you know...it rules!
Awesome oneshot. ^__^ Keep it up.
lena
2005-11-09 . chapter 1
aww! *cuddles it* very cute portion of fluff. please do more soon.
Lunare Valhart
2005-11-09 . chapter 1
Hmph. Kai should be thankful no one called him a Christmas tree! (He should also be thankfuk that he doesn't have an appliance in his mouth that hampers speech, or they REALLY would've been having a field day...) *has braces, as well*

The writing was well-timed and you did a good job getting into Kai's irritation and self-condciousness that comes with having such an obvious "flaw." ...Now that I think about it, though, Kai's [grandfather's] rich enough; why didn't he just ask for invisible braces?

The kiss was my favorite part (obviously) - It was sweet, not a complete make-out session.

There were a few grammatical errors, but they could be easily overlooked. Overall, congratulations on an original and well-written piece!
Laurelleaves
2005-11-09 . chapter 1
haha omg lol that was so funny ^-^ i loved it YAY for TyKa, 'walking lightening rod' ha thats klass ^-^ TyKa 4 ever!
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