x3 Nice ending to this chapter.

Why did you stop writing this? It's AMAZING! One of the best stories I've ever read, and trust me I've read a lot.

very intense an interesting...can't wait to read more.

Great chapter; yes, a...whatever scary vampire you said might just get in his way, LoL. Update soon!

this may be a very strange thing to say, but I've never known anyone who's been in a coma before. oO

told you it was strange. this chapter was great! ^^

I swear you are an EXCELLENT author. I'm rather fond of the darkness as well and you pull it off so nicely...very very good. I hope you update ASAP. Your story is THE best I have EVER read.

lyokolady

Well Merry Christmas! I really like this story, you are doing wonderful work, so original yet so captivating, look forward to your next chapter.

sincerely,

castaway567

Whoa, this is so dark! I love it! Continue soon.

Despite what you may think, I actually did know that a duck's quack echoes. ^^ I watched that episode of mythbusters in fact. Maybe I should go back and change that line since it's annoying some people... Gah... I'll fix it.

hey it won't let me log in. the story is great so far. the one thing I want to say is this. duck's quacks actually DO echo. they proved it on Mythbusters. they do echo, but only very slightly. you can only detect it with highly sensitive equipment. quoting Jamie Heineman (spelling?) "Quack, damn you!"

creepy, very creepy, now watch me wake up screaming tonight. if it was like, in a video format, I'd definitely be having nightmares. so just to clear up some of my confusion, Ulrich's in the middle of confronting Bart, Odd's heading to that floor's control room with the pixie, and Jeremie's in some sort of torture chamber? scary...

Now you're just being too hard on yourself. This story is excellent beyond anything I have ever read. You portray everyone's characters beautifully and your new ones are just as well played. This IS an honest review. Anyways, this chapter was worth the wait. I am counting the minutes until the next one.

lyokolady

I honestly think the chapter isn't that bad. It may be a little sparse on detail compared to your other chapters, but it works just fine. Look forward to your next chapter, good story.

...Awesome!! I really like Tricky Trixie the pixie!^^ I love that line...

GREAT JOB! Update soon!

I love this story more and more. Keep it up and happy thanksgiving.