Teehee. That was funny. I was waiting for Zuko to just go off.
:-)

Long time no see! Remember me? I used to be Dangerousblackfire/ Psycho-Freak-Chick! Anyways...

I liked how you dealt with the start and flow of the story. You began this with Zuko and Katara already together instead of completely turning them OOC and making the story completely stupid.

However, I'm not really a big fan of ZxK so I'm actually suprised I read this. But, at least it was funny. :-) The only real problem I want to point out is some of your grammar. Like in this sentence for instance:

QUOTE: Zuko, realizing that while he was angry- an angry Katara was very very scary, picked up the girl he loved and carried her away, ignoring the cabbage merchant’s sales pitch.

You should have added a few commas in there so it looks like this:

REVISED: Zuko, realizing that while he was angry - an angry Katara was very, very, scary - picked up the girl he loved and carried her away, ignoring the cabbage merchant’s sales pitch.

I also added in a dash and took away a comma. I think that does much better! :-)

Anyways...

~Signed,

♥ Kittie ♥

lol

yay! no more cabbage! (stupid cabbage) now the stupid cabbage man will leave them alone! yay!

CABBAGE! Funny story, definitely. Also sayinghi.

omg. This is pure genius.

ahaha, that was brilliant!

hahahaha that was funny

Normally I don't even read things that say KxZ, but the Cabbage Man and his unpredictable antics got the best of me! Very funny!

LOL! My Cabbages!

Great story! Poor Cabbage Man...